Work In Progress, Dean Forester Fic, "Army Dean"

[piratelf]

Hi!

I don't usually do this. I like to post fics, or at least chapters of fics, which are nice looking, easy to read, cleaned-up and complete.

But this time I'm going to show you something that I've been working on for over a year. I call it "Army Dean" though the actual title is "Whatever Happened to Dean Forester?"

What happened to me here

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[daihinmin]

Hi, both are great. I like the ending of the Lorelai/Dean one. really curious about what the heck happened with dean and his parents. Same with the Rory viewpoint. wondering what the reaction to that last statement of his will get. I also like the postive parents viewpoint(angst is always good, but every so often some fluff is needed). can't wait to see how you finish these.

(edited after reading some of the other reviews.; couldn't find an edit button though)

---((quote thing not working))"I did have a scene written that they invited him in and talked with him, and things are a bit uncomfortable, like in the Rory version, and then one of his parents asks, "So where are you staying?" giving Dean the understood unspoken message that "It's not gonna be here." What do you think of that?"---

I could so see that happen, and just like when his dad said "what are you doing here?", he would be so hurt. the angst level would shoot through the roof.

And the idea of Rory catching Lorelai and Dean in a VERY adult kiss would be very interesting. nothing better than having my fav. couple showing their love, and rory realizing that dean isn't some guy that she can take advantage of and dump for someone else.

I'm having a hard time picturing Dean with a buzz cut. I also wonder what the other townsfolk will say about how much dean's changed. are you going to include that viewpoint as well?

-thanks for some great stories :)

[piratelf]

Hi, both are great.

Thanks!

I like the ending of the Lorelai/Dean one. really curious about what the heck happened with dean and his parents. Same with the Rory viewpoint. wondering what the reaction to that last statement of his will get.

That might get re-written now, but this has been really helpful!

I also like the postive parents viewpoint(angst is always good, but every so often some fluff is needed).

I agree!

can't wait to see how you finish these.

Thank you! (Me too! *LOL* )

I could so see that happen, and just like when his dad said "what are you doing here?", he would be so hurt. the angst level would shoot through the roof.

Right, if I'm going to put Dean through hell, I might as well go all out!

And the idea of Rory catching Lorelai and Dean in a VERY adult kiss would be very interesting. nothing better than having my fav. couple showing their love, and rory realizing that dean isn't some guy that she can take advantage of and dump for someone else.

I'm glad you like that idea! It won't fit in either of these, and I'll have to come up with an explanation as to why Rory doesn't know about this (Maybe it's new, or maybe Rory's been out on asignment, working on that) but I'd love to see that hit Rory like a ton of bricks too. Aand Lorelai ALWAYS seemed to appreciate Dean's great qualities, which Rory ALWAYS took for granted, so there could be a little discussion between the two of them on that point.

I'm having a hard time picturing Dean with a buzz cut.

I know! I dodn't have photoshop and my little photoshop-like program can't really put a buzz cut on him.

I also wonder what the other townsfolk will say about how much dean's changed. are you going to include that viewpoint as well?

Absolutely! I've planned to do that from the beginning. GOTTA parade him past Miss Patty with his new hot bod! *LOL*

And I want Luke to strike up a conversation with him in the diner, without recognizing him. Being all nice, and 'Hey, good job, buddy, we really appreciate what you're doing over there'.

-thanks for some great stories :)

Thank you for reading them!

[piratelf]

I gave the Ranger Cut a try in my pathetic little program. And I posted the manip above. It is a VERY BAD manip but I think it can give you an idea of what it would look like on Dean.