Heat (Piper & Trickster) PG-13 2/7

Aug 21, 2007 07:25

The epic fanfic by greenygal and I continues. As always, comments are appreciated!

Part One is here.

Part Two... )

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_angelicorn_ August 20 2007, 23:22:49 UTC
Wow. This fic is rocking my socks.

I'm admittedly kinda late on the bandwagon, given I got suckered into this pairing by Countdown and don't know that much about their respective backgrounds, but wow. This fic seems really thoroughly researched, and so far, an excellent character study.

Also, the whumping is always fantastic :) It's always so much easier to be sympathetic to characters who are occasionally jerks if they're in pain...

Really looking forward to seeing where this is going :)

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blinkytreefrog August 21 2007, 11:27:54 UTC
Thanks for the kind words. There was a lot of research done for the fic, not so much for the character details, because we both had a scary knowledge of the characters, but for the medical details. Luckily I have a friend who's a nurse; she helped correct the inaccurate details.

The situation's going to get much worse, I can tell you that :-).

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greenygal August 21 2007, 12:24:38 UTC
I'm admittedly kinda late on the bandwagon, given I got suckered into this pairing by Countdown and don't know that much about their respective backgrounds, but wow.

If you haven't yet seen them, vigilante_wake has an excellent series of posts summarizing the characters' important storylines.

This fic seems really thoroughly researched, and so far, an excellent character study.

As Blinky said, the research was mostly medical, and that was all her; I was no help. But it's nice to hear the characters are working well for you!

Also, the whumping is always fantastic :) It's always so much easier to be sympathetic to characters who are occasionally jerks if they're in pain...

We may have been taking advantage of that. Just a little. :)

(Actually, I think the thought process was, okay, so we're evil, how can we best express it? But aside from that. *g*)

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lethargy_lass August 21 2007, 02:39:43 UTC
Cool! I love the discussions between them, it really brings out their characters.

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blinkytreefrog August 21 2007, 11:29:14 UTC
We had to resist putting in too many conversations about obscure details from older comics. We didn't want to confuse people too much :-).

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greenygal August 21 2007, 16:27:11 UTC
At least...not this time around. *sweet smile*

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kirke_novak August 21 2007, 04:36:10 UTC
More angst - yay :D erm... I mean, poor Trickster.
I'm really enjoying this fic.

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blinkytreefrog August 21 2007, 11:30:02 UTC
There's no such thing as too much angst. Though these two might disagree :-).

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kirke_novak August 21 2007, 11:31:43 UTC
Oh and since when do we care about their opinion? Shut up, boys and take off your clothes! :P

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greenygal August 21 2007, 12:25:23 UTC
Gen. We swear it's gen. *g* Mind you, Trickster is already shirtless... *eg*

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dayofjudah August 21 2007, 14:12:35 UTC
I love the ending to this part, and also Trickster complaining about his fanboy. Heh. The conflict is just -- at every turn, you're reminded that their alliance is uneasy, and Trickster is a skittish butthole sometimes (especially when he's been shot as he so delicately reminds us X3). Anyway, in other words, yay. Awesome. :3

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greenygal August 22 2007, 20:05:01 UTC
Thanks! The bickering was really the most enjoyable part of writing this (well, maybe the angst too). The boys both have severe emotional issues, and it's not helping them get along. Plus, you know, Trickster's a jerk. *g*

and also Trickster complaining about his fanboy.

He's never gonna let that go. You steal a Rogue's name at your peril, and making off with his gimmicks, well, that's just adding injury to insult. Your injury. *g*

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lukuma August 23 2007, 03:11:18 UTC
Great chapter, I loved it.

I woobied at the "Why do you want to be made of glass?" "It's better for people to know who you are, isn't it?"

I love their strained alliance that they made. Their arguements leave a lot unsaid. I wanna see where this leads so badly.

We had to resist putting in too many conversations about obscure details from older comics. We didn't want to confuse people too much :-).

Put them in! Twisting canon is fun!

Trickster is kind of an ass. I can kinda see why, but to make comments like that ("You didn't have to sneak in a grope") there has to be underlying issues.

Can't wait for more!

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greenygal August 24 2007, 02:32:54 UTC
I woobied at the "Why do you want to be made of glass?" "It's better for people to know who you are, isn't it?"

Yeah. *pets boys* It's much of the difference between them summed up in one exchange.

I love their strained alliance that they made. Their arguements leave a lot unsaid.

Neither of them are real big on discussing important emotional issues (although Piper's mouth does tend to engage along with his temper). Hence the pain and delirium, first choice of h/c writers everywhere to get their closemouthed characters to open up already. :)

Trickster is kind of an ass.

Yes. Yes he is. :) In his defense, he's in a lot of pain and he's very unhappy about being so helpless that he can't even get out of bed without leaning on Piper. Piper could be more understanding about this, but it's not all that surprising that he's not.

I can kinda see why, but to make comments like that ("You didn't have to sneak in a grope") there has to be underlying issues.

Oh, the boys have lots of issues...

Can't wait for more!

And Blinky has

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