His Own Shadow

[pins_and_wheels]

Title: His Own Shadow - part V
Author: pins_and_wheels
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17
Warning: AU, dark, non-con, beta-less
Length: 40k and growing, part V is 9k-ish
Pairing: Kai/Taemin (main), Key/Taemin, one-sided Minho/Taemin, Jinki/Taemin
Summary: Taemin loses a part of himself he doesn't know how to hold on to.

Comments

[honeyandclovers]

I just sat and read all the chapters of this fic, up until this point. I'm actually a little baffled that this hasn't garnered more attention because, honestly it's amazing. The plot-line, characterization and your writing skills are all fantastic. You have such a delicate way of going about things that leave me wanting to see more of Kai's character, it's just the right amount of super creepy and sexy at the same time that it's believable. This is all very realistic, despite the theme being clearly fictional. The only thing I can say as criticism is that you might benefit quite a bit from a beta, there are small typos here and there and the font changes from time to time, like there's something wrong with the coding... Neither of these things are actually a strike at your writing skills, which I have to say again, are flawless and often times borderline poetic. Just a suggestion!

If you're looking for a beta, I would be honored to help you. If that isn't too out of the blue and weird.. I haven't written fic in a while but I'm very keen on things like editing~ Anyways, this is beautiful and I really hope you update it soon!