[jongho] wish i was your lover

[pinkweather]

wish i was your lover
~6,500 words
Jongho, 2hyun, PG-13
summary: Jonghyun is horribly misguided about the proper rituals of courtship, and Minho frankly cannot take a hint. Desperate, Jonghyun turns to extreme methods…and what better way to make an impact than to pretend he’s going out with a Super Junior member?
a/n: for hyungdeul. nevar evar stop at z :<

Comments

I LOVE YOU

[hyungdeul]

oh my god. OH MY GOD. you don't know how much i screamed with joy when i saw this on my timeline. you are amazing, i don't even. really, if i could do this entire comment coherently, but in 64-pt. font and in a tacky blinking marquee of rainbow colors, i'd do it.

first, i love how you wrote jjongasaur! ♥ my heart leapt with joy pretty much everytime he opened his mouth and was all derp-derp in front of minho and exasperated with kibum and ~shy~ around kyuhyun. jongho and 2hyun are so adorable ♥

second, there were so many quotable quotes and hilarious scenes! i loled forever at kibum conspiring with jinki (and jinki having no choice but to agree) to fake an injury; i can so see them doing this.

"you’ve finally graduated from being a self-centered douche!”
lol omg key gets the best lines, dying

Siwon nods. “I asked my bible study group to pray for you.”
oh, siwon. you would.

AND THE NINJA (okay, not so ninja) KYUHAE! ♥ i think you wrote both of them so well, especially kyuhyun and his snarking. and i love how donghae was so secure in their relationship that he didn't mind jjong constantly asking kyuhyun out, lmao /is reading too much into it orz. please come on over to suju fandom and write my otp 8D /pleads, is shot in the head

in conclusion: yes, i love you forever. and i believe i owe you something as well. ♥

I LOVE YOU MORE

[pinkweather]

OMG BIRHEN JONGYU FIC, SO ESSITED!!!1! *A* and yay, i'm glad you thought the kyuhae part turned out okay because i had no idea if i was butchering them already.

i love you too foreverrr, never stop writing ♥♥♥

Re: I LOVE YOU MORE

[hyungdeul]

i don't even know how birhen jongyu fic is supposed to go! :( see how much i love you, trudging through this dim path where i literally know nil about the rest of the way, uhuhu. anyway, if and when i finish it, you know where to look for it. 8D

you wrote kyuhae like i've always wanted to write them - funny and adorable! they always end up either angsty or sappy or porny in my hands. :(

and no, i totally love you more. ♥

no, I do <3

[pinkweather]

madz will light the way! :D all i want is for an ending where they will no longer be birhen anymore, ohohoho~ alsdkfaj will check obsessively for it every single day *_*

also that sadface is totes out of place :| i stan you and your kyuhae fic (+ everything else) sfm write moarrr ♥