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Aug 18, 2004 10:45

An exerpt from "Berryman", one of my favorite poems by W. S. Merwin ( Read more... )

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Jim Carroll loupgarouone August 18 2004, 12:53:53 UTC
I typed a few poems of his so you can have an idea of what I am talking about. I hope you'll enjoy them as much as I did when my eyes first touched his words.

NOTE

The only time I am not dead
Is when I am

Cross-referencing

The only time I am alive
Is when I find an intersection.

Measuring.

Still
I can't slip through, my daemon diminished

Life and this
Love in cold climate

LONG DISTANCE

Speaking to you on the phone
I can't lift my mind
Up off the carpet
While it is filled with the weight of your breath and lips

I feel the desire as I feel the void
I feel the distance dissolve like
The curling black smoke of rubber burning
Leaving a paw-shaped print on the ceiling

POEM

Nobody is going to ruin me
If I have to I will ruin myself

I've spent too much time
Expended angelic energy
On my own disintegration to hand the contract over
To another now
As if it were
A finished painting
Needing only a signature

You are not going to get me
You are never going to be with me
As once was

There will always be the poem
I will climb on top of it

And come

In and out of time
Cocking my head tothe side slightly
As I finish shaking, melting then
Into its body, its soft skin

Is not a lit. I'm glad you are at peace,
But everything you know leads to ruins.

It's a neat trick
My body rising above the city
Watching the boroughs recede
Into blots of pumice and amber, amethyst

It's a harder trick
Turning love that's lost in betrayal into something
Beside bitterness into anything beside this rage

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Re: Jim Carroll pinkteaset3 August 19 2004, 08:48:32 UTC
Oooh... VERY nice.

I was thinking yesterday as I was looking at The Book Of Nods.. his mood often feels similar to the one expressed by the character in David Bowie's OUTSIDE, in the song "The Voyeur Of Utter Destruction (As Beauty)":

I shake
And stare at the sun
Till my eyes burn
I shake
At the mothers brutal vermin
I shake
And stare at the watery moon
With the same desire
As the sober Philistine
And I shake
(Turn and turn again)
Worm, the pain and blade
Turn and turn again

The screw
Is a tightening Atrocity
I shake
For the reeking flesh
Is as romantic as hell
The need
To have seen it all
The Voyeur of Utter Destruction
As beauty
I shake
Turn and turn again
I shake
Turn and turn again
I shake [x3]

Research has pierced
All extremes of my sex
Call it a day
Call it a day
Needle point life
Blinds the will to be next
Call it a day [repeat]
Today [repeat ad. inf]

It's the lyrics, as well as the mood which the music itself overwhelmingly presents. Do you know this song?

xx
Mella

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Re: Jim Carroll loupgarouone August 19 2004, 09:52:27 UTC
"Do you know this song?"

Yes

"It's the lyrics, as well as the mood which the music itself overwhelmingly presents."

Lyrics are so important to me. Bowie has always been able to captivate or surprise me.

Have you seen his Sound and Vision tour(1990) with Louise Lecavalier from La La La Human Steps?

You can check her Infante, c'est destroyperformance and many other things.

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