EUREKA!!.....
Anothr poem is born! I got my critique on the Abi poem from my creative writing class and it turns out my teacher knows Abi. LOL funny stuff. I wrote a very poem and right before I was about to hand it in, I got so shy. I just never wrote in that manner before. It's called "The First Time".
"The First Time"
I never thought this time would come.
My heart races just thinking about it.
I push his big button and he begins to moan.
There's never quite a moment like the first time.
I never believed it would happen to me.
My palms start to sweat at the touch of his chiseled body.
I find his different buttons and his moans keep getting stronger.
There's never a satisfaction as fulfilling as this.
I never imagined how life-altering it can be.
My thoughts keep flooding if I'm doing it right.
I tremble with utter anticipation.
There's never a thrilling experience like making the first banana milkshake.
"The First Time"
I never thought this time would come.
My heart races just thinking about it.
I push his big button and he begins to moan.
There's never quite a moment like the first time.
I never believed it would happen to me.
My palms start to sweat at the touch of his chiseled body.
I find his different buttons and his moans keep getting stronger.
There's never a satisfaction as fulfilling as this.
I never imagined how life-altering it can be.
My thoughts keep flooding if I'm doing it right.
I tremble with utter anticipation.
There's never a thrilling experience like making the first banana milkshake.