Drabble: That Night

Jul 09, 2008 13:53

So I was bored and was procrastinating finishing up the latest chapter of A&G. >_> I went back to my first dramione drabble I wrote I awhile back. And decided I wanted to practice writing in Draco's POV.

Title: That Night
Author: pink_martini2
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1075
Notes/Warning: This is kind of a sequel to that first drabble I wrote. It follows the ( Read more... )

hp!ship: dramione, writing

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somandalicious July 9 2008, 19:51:54 UTC
I really enjoyed this! I hope, though, that you continue it. Perhaps a series of vignettes?

I only saw one mistake...And her fine hair curls tickled his lips and chin.

you have "hair curls" which is easily fixed, yeah?

anyway, keep writing.

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pink_martini2 July 9 2008, 19:55:39 UTC
ha ha thanks for pointing that out. I wrote last night around 2 am. XD and I don't have any betas.

And thanks. :D I think I might do the vignettes thing. Just wasn't sure if people wanted to continue reading from this story.

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somandalicious July 9 2008, 20:26:15 UTC
Hey no prob! sometimes, even after my betas look at my stuff, I don't notice mistakes until it is posted.

And if you ever want/need a beta, I could take a look. I'm not much for grammar, but i can't help with the rest. Just let me know!

And I think you should do the vignettes. For yourself! Who cares what the rest of fandom wants! I would read it. Fersure!

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pink_martini2 July 9 2008, 22:22:55 UTC
That sounds great. I'll keep you up on that when I write some more! For now, friend me? :D

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peanuttles24 July 9 2008, 19:58:54 UTC
that was good... i liked it

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pink_martini2 July 9 2008, 22:23:11 UTC
Thank ya darling!

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fly_chickadee July 9 2008, 20:56:36 UTC
I like sweet, fuzzy drabbles like this. :) Yay. *hugs self* XD

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pink_martini2 July 9 2008, 22:23:50 UTC
I'm usually/always reading angst. he he, I think it's my brain trying to tell me something.

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sarahyyy July 11 2008, 09:55:18 UTC
=D I love how he tried to hide her clothes. So cute of him. =D

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pink_martini2 July 13 2008, 17:19:20 UTC
he he I saw it playing out in my mind. I couldn't resist!

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blission July 11 2008, 12:15:50 UTC
awww what a sweet fic dear :)

Keep them coming! I'd love to read more!!

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pink_martini2 July 13 2008, 17:18:47 UTC
:D thank ya.

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