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Contest Entry - Fanfic - "That Elton Grass" by shadowpoet89

Jan 17, 2009 00:30

Title: That Elton Grass
Author: shadowpoet89
Email: shadowpoet89@yahoo.com
Rating: NC-17
Pairing/characters used: Dale/Saul, Red, uh, Bea Arthur?
Notes: Any and all feedback is greatly appreciated.
Warning(s): Mild spoilers if you haven’t seen the movie. Also, there’s the graphic sex.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters and, as such, I make no ( Read more... )

rated nc-17, bfff! contest: fanfic, fanfic

Comments 62

sixtwentythree January 17 2009, 09:19:14 UTC

Wow. Um.

Wow.

I had all of this stuff to say and all of these things to point out that I enjoyed and just holy fucking wow. Please write more asap!

shadowpoet89 January 18 2009, 04:22:28 UTC

Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D And I will be writing more! Well, not of this particular fic, but I've been working on other stuff with this pairing (this is just the only one I've completed so far). They're just too much fun to write. :)

Also, your icon is ridiculously cute. Seriously, it's making me want to read RPS.

japanpeterpan January 18 2009, 14:51:17 UTC

but I've been working on other stuff with this pairing
Yesssss....!

making me want to read RPS
Someone take the plunge, please. They've created enough tongue-in-cheek fodder in interviews to totally have it coming to them by now.

shadowpoet89 January 18 2009, 23:08:55 UTC

I haven't seen many interviews that they've done (or any, really), but I'm sure you're right. Those pictures of them demand it, lol.

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punch_ovaries January 17 2009, 15:07:22 UTC

i came a thousand times over.

please write more. you are exactly what this fandom needs. :

shadowpoet89 January 18 2009, 04:27:10 UTC

Well that's quite the compliment, lol. I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you! Wow, that's really, really nice of you to say. :D And I will definitely be writing more - I love this pairing.

punch_ovaries January 18 2009, 05:25:30 UTC

GOOD.

uh, i mean. i really am looking forward to more from you! :>
oh, and i forgot to mention, but that line with Saul cursing in Yiddish? that did me in. i don't know why, but that was just so fucking awesome and hot. :>

shadowpoet89 January 18 2009, 06:27:49 UTC

Awesome, you liked the Yiddish. :D I liked it but I was a bit unsure, so I'm glad to know it worked.

Duuuuuuuuude. japanpeterpan January 17 2009, 20:05:46 UTC

Omg. Had to read this twice before commenting, because the first time you feel like the characters, braindead and 'sploded ( ... )

Re: Duuuuuuuuude. shadowpoet89 January 18 2009, 04:32:08 UTC

Braindead and 'sploded? Always good to hear. :D

Thank you so much for the great feedback! Seriously, that was so great to read. Now I've got a crazy pothead grin, but I'm totally cool with that 'cause crazy pothead grins are awesome anyway.

eonism January 18 2009, 02:43:40 UTC

This is so awesome and true to character. So many fantastic lines, but this was my favorite,

He wants to fucking kidnap those fingers, steal their identity and take their place

That is so Dale. Just an awesome fic all the way around.

shadowpoet89 January 18 2009, 04:33:46 UTC

Thanks so much! Good to know it came off true to character. And hey, I like that line too. :)

timetodance410 January 18 2009, 04:21:32 UTC

Dale calls Saul to say goodnight?

Fucking win.

It was totally hawt in the most awkward "i'm fucking my best friend but it's really kind of awesome" kind of way.

"You're awesome," Dale says, quieter.

That's bro-code for ilu.

shadowpoet89 January 18 2009, 04:37:32 UTC

That's bro-code for ilu.

Oh, totally. ;) Lol. But seriously, thanks for the feedback, man. I'm really glad you liked it.