Darkness Into Day for Kitsunejin

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Recipient: kitsunejin
Author: derryderrydown
Title: Darkness Into Day
Pairing: Brad/Ray
Word Count: 6,600
Rating: R
Summary/Warnings: Ray visits Brad in Britain. Brad really should have known better than to introduce him to some Royal Marines.

Comments

[kitsunejin]

OH MY GOD. Oh my god oh my god I don't even know how to deal with this, it is so amazing and so perfect!

I can't even believe how well you've got their voices down, their personalities and their interactions. Ray is so wonderfully, perfectly Ray in this, ugh, I cannot even. Irritating the fuck out of everyone, such a little shit, and so smart, and so brave. And Brad! You got his rollercoaster emotions so perfectly, how fucked up he is - but also how he just takes it and deals with his shit, no matter what. It's awesome, and it's why I love him so much, and ugh. Yes.

"This is not a homophobic bitchfit," Brad said carefully, calmly, "This is jealousy. Extreme fucking jealousy." OH BRAD. He doesn't really have the BEST coping strategies? But it's pretty great.

And, holy shit, the sex was so good. I love, love, love that Brad was the one taking it; that the fact that he enjoys taking it up the ass doesn't stop him from being his typical bossy, toppy self. It's gorgeous, scorchingly hot - SO GOOD.

And then the ending!! Oh my god, it's simultaneously so hilarious and so sweet.

Brad kissed him, hands tight on his ass. "I wasn't actually planning on coming out," he finally said, and Ray snorted.

"You totally were."

LOL LOL OH BRAD. Ray knows you too well! So perfect.

Thank you, thank you! This is so wonderful, THANK YOU! ♥ ♥