one-shot: Countdown to Breakdown

[sashjun]

Title: Countdown to breakdown
Pairing: Maru, Ueda
Rating: R
Summary: Spin-off from Underneath the Christmas Tree. Ueda suddenly realizes how big of a deal one kiss and an arm around his waist could become.
Note: Countdown to Breakdown is a song by Baby Woodrose, though the fic just borrows the name. Thanks to drphoenix for read through!
For pipsqueaks

Comments

[yararanger]

*o* FIC

cklvhsgfhs omg this is so cute :<

Kame, you play with the juniors a bit too much.

LOLOLOLOLOL oh Kame, you are such a kid XD ♥

and omg Tacchan slept under the tree again *flails*

“Pass it on, Nakamaru. Tegoshi’s orders.”

I CAN SEE THIS BEING REAL AND OH GOD THAT CONCEPT OPENS A WHOLE NEW REALM OF OPPORTUNITIES RIGHT THERE AHAHAHAHAHSKFJGHS GENIUS XD

He manages to dodge every other attempt to pass on Tegoshi’s orders to him.

in my mind Countdown backstage is now this chaotic mess of people running around kissing each other on the cheek in a surprise attack much like how Nagase regularly attacks Koichi XD *weeps* beautiful ♥ XDDD

Nakamaru is pouting and saying that Ueda won’t blow a kiss at him, and so Ueda does. Nakamaru beams and Ueda finds his tongue.

“Nakamaru has been asking for the kisses a lot lately,” he murmurs and the staff laughs.

*gurgles and rolls around* wauthgbfshj that needs to happen forever skjgsfhg <333333333333

“If your mother could´ve gotten it in, we can get it out.”DON'T UNDERESTIMATE UEDA

[sashjun]

btw they are seriously serious in your icon <3

in my mind Countdown backstage is now this chaotic mess of people running around kissing each other on the cheek in a surprise attack much like how Nagase regularly attacks Koichi
We both know Tegoshi would love to b responsible for such a tradition that would own up to the greatness ;D <3

DON'T UNDERESTIMATE UEDA'S MOTHER OKAY
Me?! NEVER!

SAGHDKJSHNKJF I am supper happy that you liked it! Thanks for throwing ideas at me earlier! And just you know THANK YOU! marudaaaaaaaaaaaaa ;D

[ryogrande]

OH MY GOD YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY MARUDA THEY ARE SO CUTE :3 WITH THE COUNTING AND THE KISSING AND THEN THE GROPING *_* i squealed when ueda started to confess, ngl. >.>

[sashjun]

<3 I love them mushy, I can´t help it. I can write them grown up some other time. ♥ thank you for flailing over them!

now the question is, does this qualify for the challenge or not? should I link it? idk I am hesitant.

[ryogrande]

BUT I LOVE THEM MUSHY.

AND YES YOU SHOULD!!

[sashjun]

we all do!

Okay then *shivers and marches off to admit her crimes*

[je_levy]

D'awwww! I loved Ueda's silent counting and the sharp, images that come with each mini-scene like flirting and it's becoming so serious and I adored the way you wrote Maru in the final scene.

As you've probably concluded, I loved this! Thank you!!

[sashjun]

awwwww thank you so much. Nakamaru is actually pretty hard for me to write, so yay! Ah this comment makes me happy.

♥

[threewalls]

I love Ueda's voice in this so much, his counting, the way he's sort of stand-offish and concerned about how he's coming across, the way he watches Maru.

[sashjun]

:D Ueda is interesting to write. I´m glad you liked him.

Thanks!

[kabochaimasu]

LOVE THIS! LOVE! <3 <3
You describing their character so well >,<
I dunno why but i think maruda fic surely give me heartwarming feeling~ especially yours :D
And its fluffy <3
Really, thanks for sharing

[sashjun]

Thanks for reading and commenting! Maruda is here for your heart-warming purposes <3