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[aziraphale_mel]

*pokes* why isn't anyone posting. am i not supposed to. I KNEW IT I SPEND TOO LITTLE TIME THINKING ABOUT MY FICS, TOO LITTLE TOO LITTLE. anyhoo.

Title: Boundary
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: no, not mine. none of it.
Summary: It's the end of Ryoma's first year at Seigaku, and of Tezuka's last.

Comments

[storyteller]

Waaaah! Tezuka! He frustrates me so much some times.

This was really well written: I loved the details of Tezuka walking away from Fuji, this -- the devil was short, wore a white cap and was rather adorable -- how in character they both were.

[aziraphale_mel]

thank you so much!

He frustrates me so much some times.

but, well, we still love him anyway, don't we? XP

[measuringlife]

Lovely imagery throughout, the style is very fluid and original -- the last line makes my heart ache, though DD:

(you should write a sequel DDD:)

[aziraphale_mel]

thank you!

sequel. HMMMMMM.

*cackles wickedly*

[weirdlyyours]

This was really nice, very bittersweet (Tezuka. Ryoma. Gah. Just jump each other already). And I agree with aki_omoi. Sequel. Fix them. Please?

[aziraphale_mel]

thank you!

yes, the thought of a sequel IS rather entertaining.

I SHALL TRY.

[seii_ryu]

There are so many short little bits about them but it fits together so well! I want to say more and leave a huge review... *looks at hmwk* It's just, your last paragraph is so final, and, and is there room for reconciliation?

[aziraphale_mel]

awww thank you for your comment!

aki_omoi and weirdlyyours have convinced me into writing a sequel. :D

[seii_ryu]

Yay!

[postcognitive]

:D ♥♥♥

[aziraphale_mel]

*hearts you muchly*