poem of sorts 14#

May 29, 2009 17:17

 i wrote this piece a while ago... ok not a long while... probably this monday~ XDDD

it's ok i guess... i wanted to write more but i had no idea how to express the odd feeling~ maybe it would have been better if i was more honest to my feelings?? but it's weird.. I'm sure some of you guys will get what I'm talking about in this really short piece~ so enjoy

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If Only
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Odd, is it not?
the way our eyes lock...

Odd, is it not?
the way fingers linger a second longer

Odd, is it not? 
Very much indeed

For you love someone
and I too love someone

Odd, is it not? 
accidentally brushing against your shoulder

Odd, is it not?
how you finish my sentence, and I yours

Odd, is it not?
that i can only think of you

Maybe it isn't so odd...
            that I'm still in love
                    with you.

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so what do you guy's think? ~

i'm not exactly satisfied with it actually~~

well If only i could go and experience some more~ XD

hope you guys liked it~! XD don't forget to tell me what you think yeah!
oh and i forgot to say... like my layout?~
~much luv

poem of sorts

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