Written Work: Fan Fiction

[pigslovepandas]

Title: At the Movies
Author: pigslovepandas
Pairing: TezuRyo, GP and TakaFuji
Rating: PG? (If you're very tender and fragile...)
Notes: Just fun and humor ^_^
Synopsis: People sneaking around and people not sneaking around! ^__^

The other day, Saturday, Eiji thought it’d be nice to go watch the new pirate movie playing and invited Fuji to go

Comments

[nekokatechan]

Very cute! I found it amusing in places and the idea of Ryoma and Tezuka making out in a cinema completely absurd, however it worked with how you wrote it, so no complaints here.

Nice fic!

[pigslovepandas]

Thanks! I'm glad I have the capability to amuse people ^_^. And I just thought our dear Tezuka needed some relief from his I am very, very, very well-mannered role. And we all know Echizen provides the most perfect excuses for him!

Again, thank you for reading and commenting ^_^

(amusing icon, btw ^_^)

[pigslovepandas]

Thank you for reading and commenting and noticing the little mistakes. I know it sucks when writers post unedited stuff so I apologize for that -_-(). I promise to have someone look over my fics in the future *salutes*. I will look over this one but I can't guarantee perfection since English is my second language (My other language isn't perfect either, so what does that say about me? @_@)

Once again, thank you V(^_^)V

[kc_evans]

Very cute fic. I loved Eiji's idea of subtleness and how they just "happened" to run into Oishi. And yes, I wouldn't be able to concentrate on the movie either if Tezuka and Ryoma were making out a few rows away. Of course, I'd be cheering them on to, but that's neither here nor there. The idea that Tezuka would declare he would get better at kissing so Ryoma won't know what's going on around him is so absurdly hilarious I couldn't help snicker at them, too.

Although this was well written, I personally prefer dialog in fics even if they could be written in narrative form as you did. I dunno, maybe it's because I suck at writing narration myself. Anyway, lovely job, hope you'll be posting up more soon! :)

[pigslovepandas]

I'd do more than cheer them on, I'd probably fish out my phone and start shooting pictures (or maybe even a video...). Hee!

Personally, I find it hard to write the proper dialogues for the characters (sometimes they sound off -_-). But I do admire writers who can make excellent dialogues ^_^

Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting!

[hyper_airis]

OMG! my pairings~!!! i just love you so much for writing this.. i anticipate your stories 'cause they're just so cute.. love it..

I like the POV, I absolutely LOVE Fuji. He jsut HAS to notice EVERYTHING. and this: Fuji forgives Eiji for this of course, primarily because he hasn’t told Eiji about Takashi.. Even though it's just a mention of the pairing, for me it's still a big thing. you just HAD to put it there didn't you?

And he quietly wonders who else is gay among them.
why everyone else, Fuji... everyone else.

[pigslovepandas]

*blush, blush* I'm glad you find my stories cute *blush, blush*

And of course, Fuji is just MUCH, MUCH love! I could write a full rant of how much love he is (in fact... already did ^_^).

And yes, I HAD to put that in!

Thank you for reading ^_^.