December 2005

Dec 20, 2006 09:07


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unembraced December 20 2006, 03:02:02 UTC
oh that was so beautiful i could cry.

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parallelkites December 20 2006, 05:23:50 UTC
“How do I put a touch into words?” Kaká says.

Good question. Loved it. x

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analysezceci December 20 2006, 19:30:28 UTC
Not to mention the beautiful, eloquent reply:

“If I couldn’t put a touch into words,” Sheva says, almost seriously, “I don’t know how I managed to ever talk to you.”

Yes, this epic is in a class of its own. As are the authors. Love the format of this one: the parallel perspectives. The words, the imagery, everything. Inexorably gorgeous.

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claennis December 20 2006, 07:34:47 UTC
Two clearly different perspectives on the same moment but conveyed with such depth and poignance; I think I am taken away. The phrase that caught me though was Kaka' the Kafka; Kafka who creates magical realism like no other, living in a world in which he imagines others leaving him to rot behind, the cold, closed doors in a home where familial love should be most expressed. Interesting I say, but this isn't about Kafka....

I enjoy the twist; the ironic bitterness behind the wedding between two very young and very beautiful people; the parallel of Sheva and Kaka' to Artemovsky's song, and so much more. (I'll stop for this is awfully too much.)

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deewhydeeax December 20 2006, 13:19:50 UTC
Um. Actually crying. This is...*flails helplessly* I keep trying to figure out something to say other than THIS IS SO DESPERATELY SAD I COULD JUST DIE. I keep reading it over and over again masochistically :(

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miman December 20 2006, 14:58:36 UTC
Nothing to say at all. Speechlessness.

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