HAVE TO AGREE WITH LELA ON THIS ONE.slasher48May 5 2011, 16:08:57 UTC
THIS IS PERFECTION. EVERYTHING YOU WRITE ABOUT JESSE AND ANDREW IS, SO I SHOULD NOT BE SURPRISED. FROM THE VERY FIRST LINES ABOUT JESSE REMEMBERING HIS GRANDMOTHER TO THE LAST ONES WHERE ANDREW KISSES HIM, GUH, YOU WRITE SO IMPECCABLY.
I THINK YOU HONESTLY GET THE TWO OF THEM BETTER THAN ALMOST ANYTHING I'VE EVER READ. NO MATTER WHAT 'VERSE THEY'RE IN THEY HAVE A VERY JESSE AND ANDREW ~FEEL TO THEM AND THAT'S MY FAVORITE PART. THEY ARE SO ~AUTHENTIC.
NO DIFFERENT HERE, WITH ANDREW NOT KNOWING WHAT HE'S DOING BUT STILL SHOWING JESSE HIS ~TECHNIQUE AND JESSE THINKING OF OTHER THINGS THEY COULD DO ALL AFTERNOON AND KICKING WHEN HE GETS TICKLED AND "WHAT" WHEN HE GETS FLOURED IN THE FACE, AND THEIR CONVERSATION ABOUT LA AND BOSTON AND ANDREW'S KISSES THAT MAKE HIS ~OWN BREATH STUTTER AS WELL AS JESSE'S AND THEN A FLOUR FIGHT AND "WHATEVER YOU'RE THINKING, DO IT" "YOU KISS LIKE A PERVERT" AND THE SLOW SLIDE OF HIS HAND UP JESSE'S SHIRT AND THE PERFECT LAZY KISS AT THE END. ALL THE LAUGHTER AND TEASING AND BLATANT AFFECTION AND INTIMACY HERE BLOWS MY MIND WITH HOW GREAT OF A BACKDROP YOU MAKE WITH IT.
I SHOULD REALLY GO BACK AND REREAD YOUR STUFF (MAPMAKER!FIC AND APARTMENT!FIC AND BAND!FIC AND SEVERAL OTHERS THAT JUST MAKE MY HEART SING.) AND TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE IT. FOR NOW, UNTIL I WAKE FROM SLEEPING, THIS'LL HAVE TO DO. ♥
I THINK YOU HONESTLY GET THE TWO OF THEM BETTER THAN ALMOST ANYTHING I'VE EVER READ. NO MATTER WHAT 'VERSE THEY'RE IN THEY HAVE A VERY JESSE AND ANDREW ~FEEL TO THEM AND THAT'S MY FAVORITE PART. THEY ARE SO ~AUTHENTIC.
NO DIFFERENT HERE, WITH ANDREW NOT KNOWING WHAT HE'S DOING BUT STILL SHOWING JESSE HIS ~TECHNIQUE AND JESSE THINKING OF OTHER THINGS THEY COULD DO ALL AFTERNOON AND KICKING WHEN HE GETS TICKLED AND "WHAT" WHEN HE GETS FLOURED IN THE FACE, AND THEIR CONVERSATION ABOUT LA AND BOSTON AND ANDREW'S KISSES THAT MAKE HIS ~OWN BREATH STUTTER AS WELL AS JESSE'S AND THEN A FLOUR FIGHT AND "WHATEVER YOU'RE THINKING, DO IT" "YOU KISS LIKE A PERVERT" AND THE SLOW SLIDE OF HIS HAND UP JESSE'S SHIRT AND THE PERFECT LAZY KISS AT THE END. ALL THE LAUGHTER AND TEASING AND BLATANT AFFECTION AND INTIMACY HERE BLOWS MY MIND WITH HOW GREAT OF A BACKDROP YOU MAKE WITH IT.
I SHOULD REALLY GO BACK AND REREAD YOUR STUFF (MAPMAKER!FIC AND APARTMENT!FIC AND BAND!FIC AND SEVERAL OTHERS THAT JUST MAKE MY HEART SING.) AND TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE IT. FOR NOW, UNTIL I WAKE FROM SLEEPING, THIS'LL HAVE TO DO. ♥
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