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fuck yeah scarlettblush June 19 2011, 17:32:49 UTC
FIRST!!!!
oh my god
oh
my
god

*flaps hands around*

I can't even give you coherent feedback.
I swear I will. I'm going to wax poetics just for you later.
You're a fucking genius and I'd like to live in your mind.

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Re: fuck yeah pidgeoned June 19 2011, 20:21:09 UTC
I honestly wasn't expecting this comment. I haven't posted this anywhere and was waiting for my beta to work her magic on it. D: But thank you!

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Re: fuck yeah scarlettblush June 20 2011, 11:43:59 UTC
Oh. I see. I found your story while surfing delicious, and a few people had already bookmarked it, and they'd just written hospital au, so I got excited and clicked on the page. I had no idea it wasn't actually 'advertised' on any of the other communities.

Also, I do apologise, I fear I may have creeped you out by my, a bit too excited, comment. I honestly thought it was a wonderful story!

Why weren't you expecting this comment?

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Re: fuck yeah pidgeoned June 20 2011, 22:24:37 UTC
LMAO. Which is weird, IDEK. I wasn't aware people even read stuff here! I thought it was a ~safe~ place. I have this thing where I need to post fic on LJ first to see what it looks like before I edit for typos and insert linebreaks.

I wasn't creeped out! It just surprised me that's all as I've only been writing X-MEN fic for a week and didn't think anyone would be interested. THANK YOU FOR READING (AGAIN!)

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lilyoftheval5 June 19 2011, 21:16:02 UTC
I'm really surprised how you made this work. A very different AU and it's still so them.
Great job and thanks for sharing.

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pidgeoned June 20 2011, 22:25:06 UTC
I was very nervous about posting this. I'm really glad it worked for you! Thanks for reading! :D

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ancient_arch June 19 2011, 21:25:25 UTC
This is fantastic. I have read a lot of fan fiction in this fandom the last few days and this was the first that really struck me so much that I had to comment.

This was simply wonderful.

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pidgeoned June 20 2011, 22:25:38 UTC
LMAO. OH DEAR GOD. REALLY? WOW OKAY ;______;

THANK YOU FOR READING!

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idioticonion June 19 2011, 21:49:03 UTC
Is there any possibility at all of more of this story? It's just incredible! I mean, completely different to the film, and I've no experience with hospital fic, but I was completely engrossed! And even thought they don't have their powers, Charles and Erik sound so utterly like themselves.

Really enjoyable fic. I liked it a lot!

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pidgeoned June 20 2011, 22:34:26 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! Am very pleased you like this! And yes it's completely different lmao. Half the time I wasn't sure what I was doing but the same could be said about my life. SO. YES. I might actually write more of this! Either a series of one-shots or a huge, long Big Bang-esque thing, I'm still not sure. :D

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tahariel June 19 2011, 22:01:45 UTC
Totally in love with this, too :) Doctor!Erik is so charmingly bewildered by Charles, and your Charles is so impish. The dialogue really snaps off the page. Also, Erik's mother is hilarious.

I'm going to ask the dreaded question but hopefully in a non-pressurific way - is there going to be any more? Because this is awesome on its own, obviously, but I could read more. Just so you know.

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pidgeoned June 20 2011, 22:37:00 UTC
OH MY GOD YOUR ICON. EVERY TIME I SEE IT I THINK OF E. AND C. LOCKED IN A PORCELAIN EMBRACE LOLOLOLOL.

I wanted to write Erik's mother. HE NEEDS A LIVING PARENT OKAY ;___;

YEP, THERE COULD BE MORE! Either I post a series of one shots in this universe or flesh it out more. This was meant to be an experiment, actually, oho. I wanted to see whether I'd be burned at the stake or not for writing this. (HINT: I'M STILL ALIVE THANKFULLY! WEWT TY FANDOM.)

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tahariel June 20 2011, 23:01:46 UTC
IS IT AWFUL THAT I'M CONSIDERING MAKING SOME SORT OF PHOTO-STORY ABOUT THEIR EPIC CRUET-BASED LOVE?

Seriously, every time I see MY OWN icon now I think of Charles and Erik hugging that shit out.

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pidgeoned June 20 2011, 23:10:24 UTC
Yeah, and I'm here, like, "yeah, man, hug that shit out *touches self and smokes cigarette*"

Um. >_>

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