November 2024, Day 29

[wiseheart]

Our penultimate day, ladies. This month went by like whoa!

This is the place to tell us about your daily success (or the lack of it).
May the magic be with us all!

Comments

[wiseheart]

A few more paragraphs for "Hunter, Prey" - basically expanding a 5-second canon scene that I felt could have a nice, creepy atmosphere. That meter-long centipede shimmying up the bough of a tree made me shiver while watching the episode.

Excerpt:

She (Hoshi) never liked the creepy-crazies. That had been the only disadvantage of living in Brazil (which she still considered the best two years in her life). At least the crawlers in Brazil had been small enough so that she could crash them under her shoes. Not a chance with this monster.

[artemis10002000]

Aw yes, you’re doing good work expanding on canon creepy! I'm glad you managed to get some writing done despite your busy day.

[wiseheart]

Thanks. :) And that was creepy-crawlies, of course. I'm just too damn tired to read my own handwriting.

[curiouswombat]

A metre long centipede would give me the shivers, too.

[wiseheart]

They only showed it for a second or two - and I'm sure it was a CGI-beast - but there was something deeply unsettling in the way it moved.

[adafrog]

Like the creepy.

[wiseheart]

You are braver than I am. All crawlies creep me out.

[adafrog]

If they suddenly arrive, it's a little freaky.

[akane42me]

Such a great use of that tiny 5 second glimpse of a centipede from the series! Good progress, it's really adding up.

[sallymn]

Eeeep! I would not just shover but run away squealing! I'm with Hoshi.