This Vicious Cycle Chapter 15

May 25, 2007 15:24

Okay, I was too hung over coz of last night's party galore to wake up early this morning to post this so that readers from the either side of the world can enjoy it before getting some shut eye. Sorry about that.

FF.net seems to be functioning properly now since I could access it through my laptop. So YAY!

AND I have nothing more to say. I'm going ( Read more... )

fanfic, this vicious cycle, grey's anatomy, addison/derek

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zimbalist May 25 2007, 07:57:11 UTC
i sorta feel sorry for derek. just a little, the tiniest bit. but i like this addison. lol. :/

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pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 12:56:18 UTC
hahaha. I feel sorry for Derek too but only a bit and very fleeting. :)

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holly1985 May 25 2007, 09:29:51 UTC
I feel sorry for Derek too, but on the other hand it's great that Addie shows him, what he did to her..

Looking forward to the next chapter.. :)

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pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 12:57:07 UTC
I think he deserves it and Addie wasn't so bad.

Thanks, Holly!

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truviniogrey May 25 2007, 11:32:04 UTC
A part of me doesn't want Addison to come down to Derek's juvenile level. She's better than that plus I actually feel sorry for Derek.

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pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:01:01 UTC
Addison is really better than that. Her behavior is just the hurt talking. :)

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clairels May 25 2007, 13:28:29 UTC
Yeah feel a little sorry for Derek but he have to realize what he did to her so it's a great chapter :)

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pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:02:11 UTC
Exactly. Thanks, Claire! :)

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freiheitfuehlen May 25 2007, 15:26:40 UTC
I like this a lot. I like that Addison shows him how much he hurt her with his actions and that he has to put in serious effort to make it up to her. But mostly I like that she doesn´t seem 100% okay with what she does, that somewhere deep done she´s hurting with him because she still cares about him so much. That´s the difference between Addison and Dere. More soon please. I promise not to forget to review.

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pickleminded07 May 26 2007, 13:11:52 UTC
I'm so glad you pointed this out, Kerstin. Although showing Addison's feelings on her actions wasn't at the forefront of how I write the chapters, I'm happy that someone caught the difference. I just didn't want Addison to be viewed as a total bitch. :)

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