Comments | pica_scribit: Tales of the Second War: The Night Before

pica_scribit

Tales of the Second War: The Night Before

Jan 08, 2007 17:22

Title: Tales of the Second War: The Night Before
Rating: M
Warning:: Brief torture, discussion of rape
Status: Complete
Genre: Romance, Humour, Drama, Angst
Characters: Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Neville Longbottom, Remus Lupin, Ernie MacMillan, Luna Lovegood, Peter Pettigrew, Madeleine Yaxley (OC), Lucius Malfoy ( Read more... )

luna lovegood, lucius malfoy, harry potter, draco malfoy, remus lupin, ginny weasley, neville longbottom, ernie macmillan, madeleine yaxley, smut, ginny/harry/neville, hermione/ron, hermione granger, narcissa black malfoy, reviews, het, dubcon/rape, ron weasley, peter/oc, ginny/harry, fic: night before, ernie/luna, peter pettigrew, hermione/remus

Leave a comment

Back to all threads

Lucky pica_scribit July 3 2007, 04:49:17 UTC

Comment here for Lucky.

Re: Lucky tetsubinatu August 7 2007, 11:40:32 UTC

That was touching - and oddly hot - and oh that last line just popped my brain! *giggle* Thanks!

Re: Lucky pica_scribit August 7 2007, 11:58:49 UTC

*grin* Glad you enjoyed it. I've never written Remus/Hermione before, and I doubt I ever will again, but I thought just once wouldn't hurt. :p

Re: Lucky amightypenguin August 8 2007, 00:28:13 UTC

ooooooooooooo! So cool! I love RL/Hr and this was great! I'm all a flutter :)

Re: Lucky pica_scribit August 8 2007, 00:39:58 UTC

Thank you! It was my first Remus/Hermione. I've never even read the pairing before. I'm really glad you liked it.

(The comment has been removed)

Re: Lucky pica_scribit August 8 2007, 00:42:45 UTC

Thank you! I wrote this between about midnight and 7:00AM this morning, and I'm never sure when I do that exactly how good something is. Everyone's lovely comments have been very heartening.

Re: Lucky sweety167 August 8 2007, 05:32:45 UTC

Oh...my. My oh my.
That was great. Hot.. and still, I cried a little. (I think I can blame it on PMS, but calling out Sirius' name just...)

And I loved that Neville was at the door. Seems like a busy night for Remus and his, um, maypole. ;)

Re: Lucky pica_scribit August 8 2007, 05:43:03 UTC

I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I know that Neville showing up and the story ending there reads like dodgy comedy, which is kind of why I did it. But no, Neville's not looking for love; just someone to talk to. Neville's story can be found in the second chapter of this fic.

Re: Lucky rissabby August 8 2007, 07:52:12 UTC

Lucky, lucky Hermione. She's one of my favorite characters so I don't mind so much that she got to share Remus, it's only once after all.

It's too late for me to comment properly, except to add that I enjoyed this. It was sweet and a little sad. I'm still processing DH so that tone suits me.

Re: Lucky pica_scribit August 8 2007, 11:14:03 UTC

I think the whole fandom's sort of shellshocked right now. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Re: Lucky ekaterin24 August 9 2007, 02:04:35 UTC

This was simply wonderful. You've taken a concept most people would find highly unrealistic and made it ring true, probably because you have a good sense of both characters' personalities. It's sweet and erotic and honors Hermione, this time she has with Remus, and R/S.

I'm saving this to my memories.

Re: Lucky pica_scribit August 9 2007, 03:31:32 UTC

Thank you. I admit, I was a little dubious about the idea at first, since I always, always write Remus as gay, but this plot bunny wouldn't leave me alone, and I had to see what would happen if I fed it.

Back to all threads

Leave a comment