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Tales of the Second War: The Night Before

Jan 08, 2007 17:22

Title: Tales of the Second War: The Night Before
Rating: M
Warning:: Brief torture, discussion of rape
Status: Complete
Genre: Romance, Humour, Drama, Angst
Characters: Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Neville Longbottom, Remus Lupin, Ernie MacMillan, Luna Lovegood, Peter Pettigrew, Madeleine Yaxley (OC), Lucius Malfoy ( Read more... )

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Ready pica_scribit July 3 2007, 04:48:42 UTC

Comment here for Ready.

Re: Ready binzer611 July 3 2007, 06:45:14 UTC

Oh my goodness...I just read them both, Ready and Awkward, and I loved them! Such a contrast....I laughed so hard at Ron and Hermione, and then the conversation between Ginny and Harry threw me for a loop. I want to know when you'll continue, I need more!! I rarely even ready fanfiction...

Re: Ready pica_scribit July 3 2007, 14:54:26 UTC

Thank you. I really hope "Ready" worked, but I'm still undecided. I am trying to set up some postwar fic involving Neville/Harry/Ginny, and I needed this conversation to occur naturally between Harry and Ginny. I might have to look at the story again later to see if it looks out of place or out of character. If you are interested, this is the scene I wrote wherein Neville kissed Harry.

Re: Ready rissabby July 3 2007, 21:01:36 UTC

Typo alert:
I thought I had fantacised every possible aspect... This should be 'fantasized'. Unless it's different in Brit-speak.

Just got a phone call, will have to review later. Ginny wasn't a virgin, right?

Re: Ready pica_scribit July 3 2007, 21:21:04 UTC

All words which are -ize in the US are -ise in Britain.

And yes, she was. Did I leave that too ambiguous? She just struck me as being the kind of person would knows her own body very well and would be quite sexually assertive, even her first time.

Re: Ready pica_scribit July 14 2009, 17:42:38 UTC

really really good. if JK Rowling could put such sexual content in a book, this would have been it. It was very well written--seemed like something right out of a HP book.

And you make it about more than the sex-you used dialogue to show their passion for each other (as cheesy as that sounds.) Well done.

Is there a sequel? Because the last sentence really made me wish there was!

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