Tales of Innocence - Starlit Night

[pic_murasaki]

Double posting?XD

ToI telenovela, Nina?XDXDXD *shoots self* OK, that's a joke.x_x;;;
As I've said... I didn't have much confidence in posting this ToI fic...

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"You look perfect," one of his brothers spoke, his hand reaching down on Spada's skirt and lifting it up to feel the youngest Belforma's legs, "This complete's our Nightly Rituals, huh

Comments

[sephi_chan21]

Fweeheehee. I think I'm blushing while I was reading the smutty parts. Honestly, I don't think I can beta it. xD; And I meant that in a good way.

Meaning, IT'S GOOD! ♥

[pic_murasaki]

I never blush.oo;; I wonder how it feels?>.>;; How were the smutty parts?x_x Did I do ok? Ack.XDXDXD Can't beta... uhhh... so my english was good?oo;;;;

Did I do ok?x_x;; *is obviously still uneasy*

[sephi_chan21]

xD; Your face gets really hot. And the smutty parts were... how shall I put it? 89 XD *gets shot* Well, I think there are some parts you need to fix up, but I can't really point them out. I was too busy blushing.

But you really did well! :3

[natsumi_chian]

fa;lskd;falkf;dlafk
i love the story *__________*
great story plot!
Spada in dress is cute~~~ <3 XD
keep up the good work, ne! <3<3
i admire you for having such good way of writing and stuff TT_____TT
I'm the generation of 'Writing failures'! XD

[pic_murasaki]

it's great?XD Naw, I'm still uneasy about it.x_x;;;;;

Don't think that, you just need to draw more and more so you can get better.=3 *huggles*

[natsumi_chian]

It's true! it's great for me*___*
yea, your right
I'll try my best!!! *fire on eyes* *___*