Poems, I'm addicted writing lousy poems
I honestly have no memory of writing this. It was during summer though...
Anyways.
Well I'm writing a thing based on this poem, well I had the idea for the thing from this. First it was good, then it began to suck. Now I just don't know what to do. But here it is. Take a look and comment. [It's more than requested.] And I actually like this one, s it should be good...
Could he love me?
Only one night?
I hope he could
But why?
Why do I want his love?
There’s so many others beside him,
So why love him?
He was the one who taught me what love is
He showed me the gardens
Let me taste love
Then he left me
The garden withered away
I want to live there once more
Place where I can love
For there is no one I could love
Besides him.
Anyways.
Well I'm writing a thing based on this poem, well I had the idea for the thing from this. First it was good, then it began to suck. Now I just don't know what to do. But here it is. Take a look and comment. [It's more than requested.] And I actually like this one, s it should be good...
Could he love me?
Only one night?
I hope he could
But why?
Why do I want his love?
There’s so many others beside him,
So why love him?
He was the one who taught me what love is
He showed me the gardens
Let me taste love
Then he left me
The garden withered away
I want to live there once more
Place where I can love
For there is no one I could love
Besides him.