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philote_auctor

SCC Fic: Human Contact

Mar 22, 2008 23:19

Title: Human Contact
Author: Philote
Fandom: Sarah Connor Chronicles
Characters: Derek, John, Cameron
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: The characters and situations of Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles do not belong to me. I make no money from this story. Please don’t sue ( Read more... )

fandom: sarah connor chronicles, fic: pg, genre: hurt/comfort

Comments 8

thismaz March 23 2008, 13:25:56 UTC

Oh, I like this. I just watched the episode where Derek appears, so I'm relieved to hear he survives being shot and being laid out on a kitchen table. (No, I really don't mind spoilers for the series I watch).
Your depiction of Cameron is very good and I suspect that you have also captured Derek very well too (I haven't really seen enough of him yet, but thinking back to the meeting in the prison between him and Sarah, when he begged her to leave, your Derek here feels right).
I love the way John reminds him of Kyle, but he dismissed the likeness as coincidental and that final line of Cameron's is great - for a robot who could blend in at school, well enough to fool John in the first episode, I find both her cluelessness and her determination to learn almost endearing.
Very nice.

philote_auctor March 23 2008, 19:35:36 UTC

Oh, I didn't even think of Derek himself being a spoiler. Sorry about that! (Good spoiler though, I hope!)

Having seen the whole first season, Derek is still kind of an enigma. Hardened soldier, sure, but he has his tender moments. I won't go into details, but you definitely need to see the finale.

And Cameron is fun to write. This is my first outing with this fandom, so I'm glad it came out well.

Thanks for reviewing!

thismaz March 24 2008, 06:12:39 UTC

Sorry about that!
Really, not a problem. I don't mind spoilers. If I did, I could have just not read. Your summary made it clear it was set beyond what I have seen, yet.

ficwize March 23 2008, 23:41:19 UTC

Oh, I really liked this! Great job.

It's fun to see inside Derek's head that way. And the whole scenario was richer for knowing what was coming.

Thanks!

svilleficrecs March 29 2008, 23:44:11 UTC

I really liked this. :)

nanewt011 March 30 2008, 03:18:24 UTC

I liked this, too. Your Derek voice seems very true and you did a nice job with Cameron. She has the curiosity of a cat, doesn't she?

mylittlepwny March 30 2008, 03:49:33 UTC

“That’s my job.” Cameron steps up beside and then past him, heading for the other bedroom. “I guess that makes us partners.”

Best. Line. Ever.