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bioluminescence vensre September 15 2004, 03:43:11 UTC
When he opens his mouth, Billy tastes salt like the sea. When he opens his eyes, he sees Dom's golden hair against his golden skin and his eyes burning deep and bright, like the sea caught in sunshine.

I'm going to call Puddle in the morning and read this to her. And I know exactly what she's going to say. ^_______^

Billy wraps his arms around him, fans his fingers over the taut muscles of Dom's back, kneads into his shoulder blades. Dom goes limp, tucked into Billy like a child.

So gorgeous. There's not a bit of your writing that doesn't do something to me, give me goosebumps or make my breath misplace itself.

Beauty. <3<3<3

And I think it was the people who work at the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy HQ, actually. Belgium.

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Re: bioluminescence philomel September 15 2004, 21:58:16 UTC
Eep! Ven, I think I've just melted. Please send buckets, fast!

You... just, you, uh... shiny feedback. *gapes* These statements are all applicable to your writing, hon.

&hearts

*giggles*

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overloved September 15 2004, 08:39:11 UTC
Mreh.

*paws at you* You are so funny and brilliant and I LOVE LOVE LOVE the way you write these two.

*gropes you good*

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philomel September 15 2004, 22:00:10 UTC
O_O *squirms around*

*GLEE* Thank you, sweetie! &hearts

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pinkelephants_ September 15 2004, 11:46:17 UTC
that was gorgeous! thankyou for posting that!

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philomel September 15 2004, 22:00:50 UTC
Thank you! :D

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wordsandkay September 15 2004, 12:03:38 UTC
I loved every. single. word. Just perfect, my dear. ♥

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jessionthemoon September 15 2004, 12:07:01 UTC
Ditto to this. Was going to say those words, but was eeeevilly beaten to it :P

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wordsandkay September 15 2004, 12:08:06 UTC
muahahaha. ;)

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philomel September 15 2004, 22:05:25 UTC
Hee. Thank you for the ditto. X)

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elmathelas September 15 2004, 12:26:57 UTC
That was indeed beautiful. And you're right-- a Scottish sheep is much funnier drinking German liquor than it would be drinking Swiss liquor.

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not_yet_tamed September 15 2004, 12:46:48 UTC
a Scottish sheep is much funnier drinking German liquor than it would be drinking Swiss liquor

o.O?

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elmathelas September 15 2004, 12:54:34 UTC
It's not that Germans, or their drinks, are inherrently funnier. But I've been reading a mental health text book, and the fact that I've always thought that Goldschlager was German, and then The SHEEP!

Forgive me. I'm not right in the head.

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not_yet_tamed September 15 2004, 12:57:41 UTC
Hee! I've never heard of Goldschlager before. I actually googled it when Beth sent me the fic *facepalms*

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