New Numb3rs Fic for times_for_three

Jul 09, 2007 22:06

Title: Coming Home
Fandom: Numb3rs
Characters: Don Eppes/Billy Cooper/Melinda Reeves (OFC)
Prompt: # 9. Sleeping In
Word Count: 1,121
Rating: FRT
Summary: Don asks Melinda to move in.
Disclaimer: The closest thing I own to Numb3rs is a calculator. CH and NF own the boys. I do own Melinda.
Author's Notes: See Assertion

Coming Home )

numb3rs: threesome: don/coop/melinda(oc)

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elysium1996 July 10 2007, 03:38:15 UTC
favorite lines

“Like I haven’t been woken at all hours by ringing cell phones and you two stumbling out of bed for crime scenes,”

“I don’t think you should have your own room,” he sat up against the headboard like Don. “I think you should have your own closet, but not your own room.”
the day I move out.”

“Don’s,” Billy interrupted. “Nobody’d believe we were dating serious enough to live together.”

Five, I really like the idea of sleeping in an extra hour every morning, since this is closer to work than my place.”

Don laughed, “So you just want us for our short commute.”

“No,” Melinda slid off the table to sit straddling one of their legs each, “I want you for your bodies. I want your condo for the commute.”

Tell Don and Billy i just want them for their bodies.... hee hee.

seriously, her being there if they have a baby makes sense also, it will solidify things more (which I know happens) but if I didn't know how it all turned out it would help.

Also, are you gonna (or did you?) explain why you went with Billy being daddy and not Eppes as you sounded like you were having them doing in the last story.

ok done now.

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philleegirl July 10 2007, 03:50:34 UTC
I'll so take Don for his mind, cause he's no dumb bunny.

Yeah, no matter what, once she got pregnant she would move in, but this is even better.

Well, the why is just my idea, but the how was briefly touched on in Birthday Present. There will be more explained towards the end of the series. That story should be posted on the 27th.

Oh, in two days there will be p0rn!!

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elysium1996 July 10 2007, 03:59:45 UTC
Yeah I remember the how. Cause I remeber that oh so well ; )

but reading that part sound Don was gonna be the father through me but I will try to wait till the 27th..

Ohh pr0n!

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philleegirl July 10 2007, 04:08:57 UTC
No, you are right. The plan was for Don to be the daddy. Why I changed that up? I'm evil? No, I'm not sure, but I just wanted to throw in a bit of angst. And there will be a tiny bit of it. Really tiny.

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elysium1996 July 10 2007, 14:42:29 UTC
you know reading my last comment I have come to the conclusion that I really need to reread things before I post or not comment at 12am when I can't think straight.

any way, a couple things clicked for me. I couldn't understand the part when Liz was undercover with Don and the Comment that Colby made to Liz. But now I realized (correct me if I am wrong) that other than the family (sounds so godfatherish) and close friends people do not know about Don/Coop. I was under the impression that they were out about them Don /Coop and just not open about them +Minda.... so that clears things up for a bit especially in regards to that story.

also, I know what you mean about adding the angst. I could have probabaly not had it so high or use it at all but I feel that the level I did use seems to be more honest.

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philleegirl July 11 2007, 04:10:17 UTC
This is why, in part, I wanted to do this fic series. It is really hard to deal with a complicated relationship like this in just 200 words, which I'd like to keep Wormholes too. Here I can deal with the whole story about the three of them without neglecting Megan, Larry, and Alania in Wormholes. Hopefully, when I'm finished, you'll be able to fully understand them the way I see and hear them in my head.

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elysium1996 July 11 2007, 11:55:57 UTC
sweet!

I mean I know i could have just emailed you and been like .. uh me so confused ...

but yeah I am glad you are splitting it off a bit so you can go deeper.

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