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[philippa_]

Hi,

Okay so this is for Brandy's challenge.

Title: Running never...
Author: Philippa Muir
Rating: PG-13

Comments

[memories_zz9]

why ye stressed? *huggles*

“Running never helps anybody. You have to face up to your problems” The words swirled around Sandy’s head. They were his words. How many times did he have to say them to Ryan to make him understand?
you'd be surprised. facing up to your problems can seem impossible if you live by mentally blocking things out and living two lives emotionally and mentally, you avoid confronting those things 'cause it's hard to break the barriers.

that story's sad :(
little tip: try not to keep using names - can't remember what the alternitave is called (not much of mrs bells grammer goes into my head..) but try usuing "he" and "their son" or summat..i dunno, sorry!

[philippa_]

Well quite a lot really *sighs*
Thanks for the tip Em I'll keep it in mind :D Is it prononuns? something like that. I now all these new words are just a garbled mess in my head.

Thanks so much for commenting sweetie *hugs*

[katwoman76]

Okay? No, not okay at all.
How could you...*hate* *hate* *hate*

Killing Ryan is not okay at all.
*hides sobbing in a corner*

[philippa_]

hehe but its so fun *hands you a tissue before hiding behind chair*
I've never killed him before and I had the urge too for some reason.

[fifimom]

Written nicely but if I'd known it was a death fiction I would not have read it. I HATE RYAN DEATH FICTIONS. I love Ryan in pain, emotional and physical, but I need a happy ending for Ryan. He reminds me to much of people from my life. I'm sorry, its really very good...I just didn't realize it was a death fiction.

[philippa_]

Oh sorry I should have really written a warning :s Thanks for commenting.

Lozzy's review

[anonymous]

Aw, I love it! Not that I'm really depressing, I don't love the death bit, but it's really well written. I love Sandy's fear and the whole Doctor Wallace thing! The last two lines are the best - really powerful.
So, death fic? Yeah, throw 'em at me, I'll live!
HOLBY BLUE WAS AMAZING!!! AHAHH!!! NEXT WEEK ROB/LUCY SQUEENESS I KNEW THEY'D GET TOGETHER!!!

*Coughs* sorry..... :) PS Had SO much fun today, we must do that again! xx

Re: Lozzy's review

[philippa_]

Thanks for commenting.

You found it!!! I'm glad someone likes my death fics :)

Yay about Holby Blue.

I had such fun too. We should definately do it again. I'm thinking Summer holidays and it's such a loong holiday we could do it many times and this time manage to get a hold of Pocahontas 2 and watch the other things. How are your painted veil fan fics going?

Re: Lozzy's review

[anonymous]

Non existent so far. I'm doing them today though! Just finished maths revision!! And I've just scribbed down a bit of my "mothers" prompt. Will email you the rest later only if you do the same!!
Right - off to finish Geog, and then prompts and pianted veil galore!!

After english, chem etc....

Oh help.