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Jul 06, 2006 21:41

Title: Silence
Author: Me
Rating: PG-13

Right, so this was written for the third annual OC sentence challenge.

My sentence was “Seth loses his hearing (momentarily or permanently)”
Thought up by just_reed

Silence )

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mystoryinstereo July 7 2006, 18:14:55 UTC
i loved this and the way that you wrote ryan being able to communicate with seth even through his disability. because i can understand how that would occur. ryan uses body language a lot.
i also liked how you wrote sandy and kirsten not seeing seth as seth anymore. it made sense in a way but also very disheartening.
also i loved the last paragraph. it was so cute and added a loving and deep connection between the pair.
this is just one clever fit my dear. :)
ily. xxx

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philippa_ July 7 2006, 19:44:48 UTC
Thanks Bex, I'm glad you like it :) Thanks for reading it now please can u post some of your storys up? *bats eyelids*
ily2
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mystoryinstereo July 7 2006, 19:45:36 UTC
the words 'fuck' and 'no' come to mind! :P

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mystoryinstereo July 7 2006, 19:56:27 UTC
i might do. :)
watch this space!
ily.

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philippa_ July 7 2006, 20:43:45 UTC
Why not? its fun even if u dont get comments like I don't. You also get to feature on your friends page which is rather entertaining :)

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philippa_ July 7 2006, 20:45:54 UTC
kay my computer just went crazy it deleted one of my comments and put it underneath. *pouts* I guess if u dont want to post your stories its ok but at least I get to read ur story that u do with Hannah :D

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mystoryinstereo July 8 2006, 07:23:48 UTC
dada. ermmm done? haha.
it's pretty obvious. go find it!

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philippa_ July 8 2006, 11:55:24 UTC
oooooh wow a story? can't wait to read it :) Wait wat5 have u done? I went on ur lj and found nothing *scatches head*

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mystoryinstereo July 8 2006, 20:04:33 UTC
haha. i mean daneddygirl.
go looking for it.
it's a challenge. :)

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philippa_ July 8 2006, 21:26:21 UTC
wats a challenge I'm so connfused. but i like challenges wat do I have to do? oh I get okay *begins search* how the hell am i meant to find it?

I'm off i will not rest till i find it

ily
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philippa_ July 8 2006, 21:31:09 UTC
I found it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe

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mystoryinstereo July 9 2006, 13:18:17 UTC
IMPRESSED! haha.
seriously that was good. :) haha.

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philippa_ July 9 2006, 16:40:32 UTC
haha thanks :D

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