Simple Pleasures (Neville/Hannah)

[phil_urich]

Title: Simple Pleasures
Rating: PG-13
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A/N(optional): for vegablack62

Comments

[vegablack62]

Wonderful! Thank you for writing this. I can't believe you wrote this in the time it takes five songs to play.

I like the way you linked the apple in number two and five. You did an excellent job in two expressing how a teenage girl thinks. I liked the Dean daydream a lot and the part about the older boys. Her confusion over her Neville daydream was very fun.

Strip chess -- that's funny. I can't decide if its a ridiculous idea or a brilliant one.

Thanks!

[vegablack62]

Would you consider posting this in the Neville/Hannah community?

[phil_urich]

I would love to, thanks!

[phil_urich]

I think the idea of strip chess came about from that article you had linked to about Neville's lack of sexuality. Glad you enjoyed these!

[sometimeselkie]

That second piece is just great, and probably something every adolescent goes through. It's that moment you move from fantasizing about male attention (even though you don't actually know that's what it is) to fantasizing about a certain guy because you actively desire HIM, and it's a perplexing moment. You captured the shift very well!

[phil_urich]

Thanks! I really liked the second one best too. Hannah's strikes me as being a day dreamer so it seemed like a fun piece to write.

[lovely_joy]

Lovely!! I loved it.

[phil_urich]

Thank you!