takin a break from fma 107 incoherence
TO POST THIS MONSTER.
It's actually a tiny little 50-sentence fic. But like. IT TOOK ME NINE MONTHS TO FINISH. The last 8 sentences I got to FOUGHT ME TOOTH AND NAIL. (First 35 prompts: a fortnight. Last 15: NINE MONTHS.)
Anyway. This is not officially endorsed by the 50setence comm, not even a little bit. I just saw nice prompts and wanted to ( Read more... )
It's actually a tiny little 50-sentence fic. But like. IT TOOK ME NINE MONTHS TO FINISH. The last 8 sentences I got to FOUGHT ME TOOTH AND NAIL. (First 35 prompts: a fortnight. Last 15: NINE MONTHS.)
Anyway. This is not officially endorsed by the 50setence comm, not even a little bit. I just saw nice prompts and wanted to ( Read more... )
These are wonderful, some serious, some hilarious, some heartbreaking. And LOL, I murdered sentences exactly the same way! **unofficially wrote several sets for different fandoms.**
#7 is really poignant and powerful. And then it's immediately followed up by silliness. LOL. Drunk Ahiru = be very afraid.
#16-#17 seem connected. There's so much heartbreaking emotion in both of them.
**snarks at #18.** LOL, poor Fakir.
I love #20; it describes them so well. And #21 was just begging for Autor to be included. LOL.
#23 amuses me more than it should. XD
I love #25. And the first version of #26 is too amusing. Poor them.
I have such a clear image of #28.
#29 reminds me of This Pendent Heart. ^^
#30 is beautiful.
I don't entirely get #34, but it definitely amuses me. LOL. Especially the piano being traumatized.
You know, I actually wondered about the situation explored in #36. I really like the approach you took!
#41 is so sad. ;__; #43 is bittersweet, but so accurate-seeming. And #44 is just sweet. ^O^
I love #45. And #49 is so powerful.
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#7 is really poignant and powerful. And then it's immediately followed up by silliness. LOL.
Yeah, I briefly considered re-ordering them so they flowed better, but gave up after realising there were 50 sentences and I was on a tiny laptop. I don't think it's too bad...xD But ah, drunk!Ahiru. <3
I have such a clear image of #28.
So do I! Very much considering illustrating it. Hm...
don't entirely get #34
...Autor tries to teach Fakir how to play piano? xD (It doesn't, evidently, work.)
And a general squee-ful thank you very much! to everything else. :D
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Ah! **snarks.** I bet Autor has never been so traumatized, either. LOL. That would also make a hilarious illustration. (Plus, we need more Autor art in the world.)
You're welcome! ^^ It was an awesome read.
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