Where I'd Like To Be When The World Falls Down

Feb 01, 2009 18:53


Title: Where I'd Like to be When the World Falls Down
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Rating: R for brief sexual scenes
Summary: Sawyer and Juliet on the island after the O6 leave, Juliet gets pregnant.
Word count: 2,940 (Totally was not meant to be this long...it got a little out of control)
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost or the characters used in this fanfiction ( Read more... )

sawyer/juliet, fanfiction, lost

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prerogativ2315 March 8 2009, 05:11:58 UTC
I LOVED IT. loved t, loved it, loved it♥, when Sawyer suspected she was pregnant, I was on the edge of my seat!

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phelipa March 8 2009, 05:14:39 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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rodlox May 4 2009, 04:45:52 UTC
I love this. simply and uncut, I love this. the whole thing.

Juliet keeps her distinctiveness - the only woman to have given birth on the Island.

> but as he realizes how small and helpless this little thing is he feels a sudden, overpowering feeling of protectiveness. It’s something he’s never felt before and although he’s not quite sure what it is yet, there’s something there.
rather like the last episode of 'Coupling' - there's this mental *shift* and the person remains the same, yet all the old ways are left behind as responsibility and love and everything else floods in.

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phelipa May 4 2009, 15:07:12 UTC
Thank you so much :)

(and also for going back and rereading some old fic!)
Characterization was something I was struggling with so I'm glad you thought it fit! I'm also glad you thought Sawyer stayed the same - I knew he wouldn't be all smooshy overr the baby but I had to give him some sort of attachment to it!

Thank you :)

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rodlox May 4 2009, 22:25:01 UTC
it's not old fic to me - I just found it.

actually, I think its completely in-character for Sawyer to feel protective and smooshy over the baby (though he'd deny it to his dying breath if anyone asked or teased him about it)

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phelipa May 4 2009, 23:27:07 UTC
Hahaha, no that's what I mean. It's one of my first Sawyer/Juliet fics so it's nice to have new comments on them from people who've just found them :D

Thanks again :) I agree - he probably feels a lot but represses a lot too!

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syd15 May 19 2011, 03:43:55 UTC
Oh, this is so beautifully written.

I love how they start out of desperation or hate or lust or whatever and then slowly became something more.

Badass, Juliet is such a badass, she gave birth practicly alone. Wasn't it because she needed someone to hold the baby, she would have done it all by herself. This woman is extraordinary!

The last scene with Sawyer and Rachel is super cute, I can see them so clearly in my head...

And little Rachel is such a handful, Sawyer and Juliet mixed in a tiny human being, she's bound to be troble. (But georgeus)

(Sorry if there are lots of mistakes I'm writing in my ipod and it is refusing to cooperate)

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