Comments | pheebs1: Supernatural fic, Journey.

pheebs1

Supernatural fic, Journey.

Jul 23, 2006 20:20

Title: Journey
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Some bad language
Summary: Dean POV. Life’s one long journey for Dean, but where will it end?
Pre and throughout series, spoilers for Devil’s Trap

Disclaimer: Of course, the boys are not mine. The CW owns them now!

innie_darling was a very helpful beta, and deserves praise and many cookies.

( Journey )

my fic

Comments 20

koyote19 July 23 2006, 20:03:31 UTC

oh. wow. I want to say something eloquent and intelligent...but I think you took all my words away with this.

Nice insight into Dean's thoughts, though. I thought you captured his emotions and thoughts perfectly at the various stages of S1. Very cool.

pheebs1 July 24 2006, 18:54:44 UTC

Aw I am glad you liked it. It ended up completely different from how it started out, but I'm quite pleased with it. Thanks for posting!

missyjack July 23 2006, 21:37:29 UTC

Wonderful piece taking us on Dean's journey. Very insightful and eloquent.

pheebs1 July 24 2006, 18:55:03 UTC

Aw thanks hon! I am glad you liked, thanks for commenting. I really appreciate it.

legoline July 23 2006, 22:11:50 UTC

Oh dear God. That's just - wow, intense might be the right word. Wonderful, poignant characterisation of Dean. The ending is...whoa. It's bitter somehow.

Sam’ll come round. Dad’ll understand. It won’t fall apart. That’s a lie Dean tells himself when he feels bad about life.

That line almost made me cry. So true.

pheebs1 July 24 2006, 18:55:44 UTC

Aw thank you! It ended up different from how I started out, but I'm quite pleased with it. Dean and his endless road, poor thing!

lady_octavia July 23 2006, 22:58:22 UTC

That’s a lie Dean tells himself when he feels bad about life... That’s a lie Dean tells himself when he can’t take it anymore Wow these two are awesome!

This is really cool, Dean really is a man constantly in motion and I think he doesn't know where he's going, but he's going to make damn sure he gets there.

pheebs1 July 24 2006, 18:56:27 UTC

Thanks so much! And exactly, it's important to get to the next destination, but then what happens - he just moves on. There's an odd sense of routine and certainty, within all the uncertainty. Thanks for commenting, I appreciate it!

apieceofcake July 24 2006, 13:19:24 UTC

Wow! Lovely and insightful, thanks!

pheebs1 July 24 2006, 18:57:16 UTC

I really appreciate the comment, thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed.