Bodyswap come Office Fic

[pheebs1]

Title: Work that Body.
Rating: PG 13
Warnings: Bad Language, some sex talk & mild Dean/OFC kissage
Genre: Humor, Gen.
Summary: Dean and Sam swap bodies; Dean has to work in an office to set them right.

Begun for spn_challenges, er, challenge, of ‘Sam and/or Dean get day jobs’ and has crossed with a bodyswap fic. My dear beta innie_darling and I have been affectionately

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[acostilow]

Hee. Awesome. Dean's such a goober. :)

[pheebs1]

Aw thanks for posting!! I appreciate it ;)

Poor Office fraught Dean!

[acostilow]

It's a wonder he survived with his sanity intact!

[pheebs1]

Heh! The worrying thing is he acts like I wish to in my office ;)!

[teamane]

It's a very interesting fic. I loved Dean's reaction. Lol. It's so like him.
Very good. I loved it.
:D

[pheebs1]

Awww thank you! Poor ole' Dean I stick him in Sam's body then I make him work in an office!!

[innie_darling]

HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Megacrack, baby! You are my dealer of choice!

[pheebs1]

Ha ha ha ha ha! Megacrack indeed. I was still umming and ahhing over the Eileen house bit and Sophie and then I...well I thought POST IT!! Deal that crack. So I did. Thanking you for all your help with this - you were infinitely patient.

[pheebs1]

Aw thank you! *hugs*. Glad I'm funny, you know, to someone other than me.

[iamstealthyone]

What a fun story. :) So much good stuff in here. I loved how freaked out Sam and Dean were at first, and then how they adjusted to their new bodies and made the most of things. Great job with all the humor in this fic.

Favorite lines:

‘Whassup Dean, why the…’ Sam sat up, or rather SaminDean sat up and looked in shock at Dean. ‘Why am I looking at myself?’

I like how deadpan that last line comes across. Cute. *g*

‘Dude, are you checking me…you’re checking yourself out? That’s sick!’

This was too funny, as was Dean wanting to look at his butt. *snicker* I loved his vanity here.

Dean started to look through the journal impatiently, finding nothing. It was strange turning the pages with Sam’s much longer fingers and he fumbled a couple of times, got a bitch of a papercut, and cursed himself.

I loved all the details about how differently they had to do things now that they’re in each other’s bodies. The little things like this papercut really added to this fic.

He tried not to think about the shower later because frankly, having

[pheebs1]

Thank you so so much for commenting and in such detail. It's good to know what worked for people, I love such great feedback.

Aww, just when I think this will be all about the funny, you give us that sweet morsel. *hugs Dean* Bless him. Actually the thought that Dean might now have the headaches only came to me because Eileen floating the ring back to her was added in at the last minute and I thought, well I must deal with that.

Dean's aerobics fantasy, hee. It's his worst nightmare I think, Sam's watching lots of women stretch and he's at WORK in and OFFICE.

Anyway, thanks so so much for such detailed comments, I really appreciate it.

[iamstealthyone]

Actually the thought that Dean might now have the headaches only came to me because Eileen floating the ring back to her was added in at the last minute and I thought, well I must deal with that.

Well, definitely a good call to deal with that issue, because it really rounded out the story. :)

Thanks again for a fun read, and you're welcome for the FB.

[ohnoscarlett]

So cute. My office is so boring now...