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phantisma

Betrayal, Supernatural, NC-17

Jan 15, 2007 12:33

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Betrayal
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, John, Caleb, Bobby
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3401

Summary: A sequel to Anything which was a Christmas request from nanakomatsu, Nothing, Something, To Be Good, Broken, To Be Strong, Nothing, No One, Alone, Yours, Mine, Better, Choice and Gathering. A traitor revealed...others ( Read more... )

supernatural, slave!dean

Comments 81

mss_celestal January 15 2007, 21:09:24 UTC

Damn, you sure like your twists...LOL! Hopefully John and Bobby can get back in time, but if they can't hopefully Dean can save Sammy.

Excellent job!! Can't wait for the next part!!!

ravensword January 16 2007, 00:48:06 UTC

Yeah...I'm twisty like that.

LOL...

sxeraven January 15 2007, 21:11:30 UTC

Oh my God! And John and Bobby are three hours away still??? Oh no!!!

I'm glad (sorta) that Dean is listening to his father, because I'm afraid he'd go right back into slave status if Richard gave him an order... but at the same time... what's going to happen to Sam in that time? And how far away is Richard's backup? I'm assuming he brought someone with him to re-capture Dean and reinforce his training in the time they can't get Dean back.

(hehe... in my infinite evilness I sorta hope someone does find Dean and reinforce the training before Dad and Bobby get back... Dad and Bobby save Sam, but then they find Dean and have to rescue him... and this time Sam gets to break him of the training or something because Bobby and Dad are going to take care of the rest of the pack with Gordon and whoever else. *nods* Dean should be returned to mostly-slave and retrained. *nods more*)

ravensword January 16 2007, 00:50:56 UTC

LOL...you ARE evil!

I'm sure that whatever happens there will be more slave-behaviors...no worries....

cariadean January 15 2007, 21:23:05 UTC

Oooh ... this is biting the fingernail stuff ...

Dean is at last second guessing his orders .. hide, like his dad wants, or save Sam, like he wants .. will his conditioning/programming win out?

So .. we going to have a firefight at Bobby's place? The people Robert called v. John, Bobby and Dean ...

This is really getting too exciting ... too ... gah ... I can't even express how much I need to know what happens next ... not want .. need!

ravensword January 16 2007, 00:51:46 UTC

If I can make my brain less gooey there will be more...soon...

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ravensword January 16 2007, 00:52:09 UTC

I know!

lvlysnidrus January 15 2007, 21:30:50 UTC

NO, SAMMY...*sob*

Omg, keep it up!!

ravensword January 16 2007, 00:52:46 UTC

*hugs*

No worries...I will!