Broken Promises, Supernatural NC-17
Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Broken Promises
Characters/Pairing: Dean/Sam
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A follow on to the "Points" ( Which Begins Here)and "Pieces" ( Which Begins Here) and "Paints" ( Which begins here") Verse, this follows The Promise of More and Promises Made...Um...Sam makes a choice ( Read more... )
Title: Broken Promises
Characters/Pairing: Dean/Sam
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A follow on to the "Points" ( Which Begins Here)and "Pieces" ( Which Begins Here) and "Paints" ( Which begins here") Verse, this follows The Promise of More and Promises Made...Um...Sam makes a choice ( Read more... )
NONONONONONO
this can't end like that !!! The police was supposed to come, and would kill dean, free sam and sam would tell them, and would kill himself.
ok maybe that was HOW I was thinking it. Your way is better anyway.
And shit, I still have exams you know ? And I'm still gonna fail if all I can think about is your verse, your Sam, your Dean, and their beautifull, shattered, bloody souls.
Not your fault though, I'm weak that way. And tomorrow when i'll wake up i'll watch 2x10 ( shit ) and i'll think about them too and shit, I think I'm screwed they won't leave me. And neither will those ones, the ones you wrote, the ones you broke.
It's...I don't know. It's such an unsitisfying and. Not that I didn't love it, i did. Maybe it's better if you let us like that. I kinda hoped Sam would break too, you know ? Or maybe Dean would realize, seeing sammy break, what he did, would kill Sam and kill himself rather than the other way around.
And what was the demon's point anyway ? Wasn't Dean supposed to tear the world apart ? Why just tear Sam apart ? Where's the fun in that ?
Sorry, it's late here, and well, I didn't want this to sound like crap. I really, really loved it.
but I think it would have been better/more satisfying if you'd just stop at the points verse. This is too definitive.
*hugs you tight, and goes to sleep with the promise of many many many more stories like that:D*
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Actually, this was rather a twisted variation on "no one beats the Winchesters at their own game"...the demon wanted Dean...figured he could break him and use him...didn't count on Dean's single minded need for Sam...didn't count on Sam breaking Dean so completely...didn't bet on either one of them being able to end it.
And...for me...it had to be definitive. I had to exorcise them completely out of my head...
Hope your exams go well!
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