Better, Supernatural, NC-17

Jan 08, 2007 20:36

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Better
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, John, Caleb
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3672

Summary: A sequel to Anything which was a Christmas request from nanakomatsu, Nothing, Something, To Be Good, Broken, To Be Strong, Nothing, No One, Alone, Yours and Mine. Dean takes care of his Sammy. Sam finally comes clean about the things ( Read more... )

supernatural, slave!dean

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sarlev_vanisa January 9 2007, 04:55:16 UTC
I wanted to be first YAY! So excited to read it, definitely will be back.

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sxeraven January 9 2007, 04:58:06 UTC
NO NO NO!!!! John can not be Dean's owner that way! No!

And ELLEN? They're TRUSTING ELLEN??? WHY!??!

I like Dean taking care of Sam, even though he's confused... but how long until he starts feeling that he's not really being 'good' because he's not being used the way he thinks good slaves are supposed to be?
...and Sam... if Dean says something that... he's not being used and Sam just breaks because thats really waht it is.. and he doesn't want Dean to feel like it's being used...

oh Dean... oh Sam... I wonder really, how worried Sam is about Dean, how much is masked by the morphine and being hurt... and I wonder when the having something of his own wears off for Dean... remembering Sam owning him or wanting that back... because Dad's not doing what he needs either with using him or punishing him (ooh can we please revisit that???!!!!!??? it was so angsty and so hurty to Sam but SO hot...)

...okay... I'll stop now.

*hugs* More soon!!! This is really... just eating my brain. I love. :)

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ravensword January 9 2007, 05:38:53 UTC
Thank you...though if you think it's eating yours, you should be in mine!

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sxeraven January 9 2007, 05:03:59 UTC
oh and yeah... the part where Dean thinks they're just dreams, until they fill your cage and become real?

so need to have Dean opening up to Sam, talking to him... trusting him.

OH I am in love with this story so much...

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jakesdream January 9 2007, 05:21:18 UTC
Awesome job *as usual* I am just praying that they catch these bastards....but I also want Dean to suffer a bit more *looks around sheepishly at how nasty that sounds*

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ravensword January 9 2007, 05:37:57 UTC
Such a bad girl you are!

This is my fic, so you shouldn't have to worry about the suffering....

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eskimosatan January 9 2007, 05:22:39 UTC
I'm probably way off base, because I generally am in fanfiction, but I've got a bad feeling about Robert. City raised. Soft. Not a hunter, but knows hunters. Knows Dean. Either that, or I'm just sadistic and want poor Bobby to have to face that with his own son. Although, you do realize that you have to update soon or face the suspense killing me, right? *hugs* thanks for the update!

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ravensword January 9 2007, 05:36:48 UTC
I'm working on the net chapter now...you shouldn't have to wait long!

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