Comments | phantisma: Nothing, No One, Alone -- Supernatural, NC-17

phantisma

Nothing, No One, Alone -- Supernatural, NC-17

Jan 05, 2007 22:06

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Nothing, No One, Alone
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, John, Caleb
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3714

Summary: A sequel to Anything which was a Christmas request from nanakomatsu, Nothing, Something, To Be Good, Broken and To Be Strong. Dean was kidnapped and made into a slave. Sam bought him back, but he paid for him with a ( Read more... )

supernatural, slave!dean

Comments 89

eboniorchid January 6 2007, 06:41:25 UTC

OH GOD!! I screamed halfway through and had to step away for a minute, because I was flailing so much I couldn't read. You break the boys so fucking beautifully! I just ... I don't even have words for how awesome your boy-breaking skills are. All your broken!Winchesters' fics fill me with sick and twisted glee, but this one is definitely at the top of my OMG-PLEASE-MORE-NOW list. *flails*

ravensword January 6 2007, 16:43:27 UTC

I have to honestly say that I wasn't sure about this chapter when I posted it. I blame my exhaustion.

I'm glad I could break the pretties for you!

dividedloyalty January 6 2007, 07:00:16 UTC

OMFG!! Did I already comment on this Verse?? I don't think I did... man, I'm so fucking lazy.

I can't believe you've got two Verses going on that I totally LOOOVE!

If I love Keeper!Sam, I totally adore Slave!Dean!!!

This chapter had the creepiest thing (for me, anyway) so far:
“As of this moment, you have no name. As of this moment you have no purpose. You are nothing. You are no one. You are alone. You belong to me. Everything that is about to happen to you is because I wish it to be so.”

Such a deliberate misuse of propriety. *shivers*Poor Dean, had to listen to that and no one came for him.
And it's just so tragic, because Dean knows who he used to be, and just can't get back. Memories alone won't make him, and it's just sad, and I hurt, because he hurts, and Sammy hurts a lot because he's hurty anyway.

Man, this is awesome!
Weeeeeee love it.
lina.

ravensword January 6 2007, 16:45:04 UTC

Thank you! I have to admit Master James creeps me out...and I created him.

*pets the boys*

Glad you enjoyed it though...I hope to get at least one more chapter up this weekend.

kamikaze_redux January 6 2007, 07:03:50 UTC

Oh. You just know how to take my heart and kick that shit into the middle of every emotion I could ever want to experience. I am on a rollarcoaster ride and LOVING the huge drops.

This chapter was intense. I felt like I was in the room with them, pressed up against the wall. And there is not release because SOMEONE opened their big fucking mouth and gave them up. Oh, I am so PISSED about that. SO PISSED. I am pissed like I am IN the story.

Oh man, now thinking about who snitched is making me all hot and bothered. I'm gonna go and just smack something, hard.

Awesome chapter. I mean, just... whew. Blow me away.

*goes to try and breathe*

ravensword January 6 2007, 16:45:54 UTC

This chapter was intense. I felt like I was in the room with them, pressed up against the wall.

That's like, the best compliment ever!

Thank you!

kath_mandu January 6 2007, 07:05:12 UTC

Wow, this entire series is just so incredibly amazing. At first, I admit to being a little reluctant to begin reading, simply because I wasn't so sure if I was in the mood for something dark and angsty like this, but now I am so very glad I did. You've done a terrific job, and it even seems like your writing has improved since the beginning of the series. Anyway, I just wanted to give you mad props for this and let you know that you have me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next! XD

ravensword January 6 2007, 16:48:10 UTC

Dark and angsty aren't for everyone...and I do tend to take dark to a whole new level sometimes...so your reluctance doesn't bother.

I'm glad you took a chance, and found something you liked. Hopefully another chapter before the weekend is over.

readerj January 6 2007, 07:07:52 UTC

I haven't commented on the last couple of chapters because I have no words to describe how I feel after reading them. The same is true here.

This hurts so much and I want to not read but I can't stop myself and I keep hoping that they're going to get a break and really I shoud know you better by now.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading and though I can't promise I'll like it part of me loves it.

ravensword January 6 2007, 16:50:20 UTC

I was going to say that you should know I will eventually get them to a place where things are better...but then I remembered that I don't really do completely happy endings...and how the VeryDarkWincest!Verse ended....

So I won't pretend. This is probably going to get darker before there's any light though.

And, I completely understand!

readerj January 6 2007, 22:58:10 UTC

The ending of the the VDWV was about the most painful I've ever read.

I remember being certain that Brothers Keeper was going to end up being only dark and painful and now it's called the Light Verse. I think it's because of this that I can continue to read the bad and painful broken stuff. Girls got to have some hope.