Comments | phantisma: My Brother's Keeper, Part 17

phantisma

My Brother's Keeper, Part 17 - Supernatural, NC-17

Oct 03, 2006 18:54

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: My Brother's Keeper, Part Seventeen( Part One Here, Part Two Here, Part Three Here, Part Four Here, Part Five Here, Part Six Here, Part Seven Here, Part Eight Here, Part Nine Here, Part Ten Here, Part Eleven Here, Part Twelve Here, Part Thirteen Here, Part Fourteen Here, Part Fifteen Here, Part Sixteen HereCharacters/ ( Read more... )

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Comments 24

kultiras October 4 2006, 02:19:40 UTC

O.O

I love the way you're adding more details about Dana's abilities as well as more details about what happened to Sam.

And as always, I just love the way you write Dean. =)

ravensword October 4 2006, 04:19:07 UTC

Thank you! I admit he gets stuck in my head sometimes...It drives us crazy.

jezdenly October 4 2006, 02:48:07 UTC

Oh man, I waited all day for this and it was worth it!

ravensword October 4 2006, 04:19:58 UTC

I'm glad I could come through for you!

alchemyonfire October 4 2006, 03:02:26 UTC

Hotness. I like how Sam is afraid to show Dean who he really is, afraid to let him see the real Sam. But I also don't like how Sam manipulates him, still. Grawr. So good.

ravensword October 4 2006, 04:21:47 UTC

Thank you much.

Old habits die hard...and Sammy's good with the manipulation.

evil_witch666 October 4 2006, 03:02:30 UTC

I am following this story for some time and I just simply love it. I love the way you are writing the story, the way you are bringing new stuff up about all of them, just everything. and you keep me on the edge of my seat with every chapter...update soon

ravensword October 4 2006, 04:25:42 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it.

There will be more each night...provided the boys keep talking to me in my sleep...

Thanks again!

wine_into_water October 4 2006, 03:13:14 UTC

OMG! You have no idea what this story is doing to me. It's messing my head! I couldn't sleep last night because I was worried what would happen to Dean and Dana. :) I read parts 1-16 yesterday and wow what a roller coaster that was! I love this story! I only hope that everything works out. Poor Sam. :( ...Dean can save him! *nods* I can't wait to see what happens

ravensword October 4 2006, 04:27:43 UTC

Wow! Thank you. I don't mean to be messing with your sleep...or your head...okay maybe your head...lol

Thanks for reading!