Comments | phantisma: Broken: Battles, Part Two

phantisma

Broken: Battles, Part Two - Supernatural, NC-17

Jul 07, 2008 20:11

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Battles, Part Two; A Broken Sequel (all Broken here
Pairings/Characters: Sam/Dean, Gabe (OMC)/Caleb, John, Bobby, Pastor Jim, Ellen, Jo, OMCs
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: (this part) 3023
Summary: Several months after Out of the Dark, Jim finally tells Sam and Dean the story of the Quem Patrocinorus and what it is ( Read more... )

Comments 5

spae July 8 2008, 05:26:17 UTC

hee - you finished on a light touch! so twisty, this story!

idiot4dean July 8 2008, 07:15:43 UTC

Love the visual of Jo finding Gabe and Caleb and the aftermath. Interesting back story that Jim's telling Sam and Dean. Looks like more fun in the future.

Looking forward to more.

kes1807 July 8 2008, 14:47:56 UTC

Love the back story Jim told Dean and Sam, but looks like trouble is brewing fast.

The end was really funny, Jo finding Gabe and Caleb and then everyone at the Roadhouse.

Looking forward to more!

mre_quecky July 8 2008, 15:43:02 UTC

Hehehe, loved it :D

jacey26 July 9 2008, 02:23:07 UTC

Thar was sweet and cute. Thank you so much for continuing to write Gabe and Caleb. THey make a wonderful couple. Especially with a bit of tension when Allen's around.