[Fic] Axel/Roxas -- Mousetrap Heart

[phantasmik]

Title:  Mousetrap Heart
Series: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing/Characters: GS!Axel/Roxas
Rating: PG-13
Total length: 1,216 words
Warnings: Girl!Axel, modern AU, drunken Roxas, and too many freakin' cliches.
Summary: But the point of the story is this: that he meets her.
Author's Note: It isn't a secret that I like playing with genderswap, and while

Comments

[gold_panner]

OF COURSE I REMEMBER

HOLY SHIT GIRL!AXEL AEKGJHF;AHTGBFVC

Oh my god I am grinning so hard over all this and I can't stop. Cute Sora Riku Roxas trio? Drunk Roxas? Girl Axel? With tattoos? GIRL AXEL AND DRUNK ROXAS

and your amazing writing

and

I may have a huge thing for girl Axel involving fic exchanging with Pia and forcing my friend Mina to draw me girl!Axel pics to paper my wall with

;akjbfvc

(seriously, the drunk voice was so cute and vivid, and all the little details and everything, so perfect. I am in like, happy shock lol)

[roterstern]

SAAAM I'M SPAZZING WITH YOU *A*

[hiza_chan]

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥~~~

[hiza_chan]

♥♥♥ It's not really a secret, but I adore Sora, Riku, and Roxas as a kind of trio in AU fics. Because Riku's Sora's best friend and Roxas is Sora's younger twin brother so he gets to tag along a lot. I blame rudy_flamthrowas Facts that Matter.

Mmm, girl!Axel needs more love. I mean, I like regular Axel just fine, but add boobs to the equation? Yeah. Not to mention it's awesome playing with her characterization, how she's subtly different than regular Axel but still fundamentally the same and just alsf; thank you for giving me an excuse to write her.

Now that I think about it, I don't think I've ever written girl!Roxas.

(Thank you so much, omg, I love you. Also, sorry for all the edits and stuff. I didn't realize all the mistakes were there until I went to post it to this journal.)

[roterstern]

SALKSDKL;SD;D;SDKF;D;SDFDSASDF

HEATHER OH MY GOD HEATHER!!!

Fucking incoherent and you wrote girl!Axel omfg sdaefldkf;sdkds;sa I'm not gonna get over this omfg

omfg I AM IN LOVE JUST LIKE ROXAS

ONLY NON-DRUNK

OMFG :'D

by which I mean: my life makes sense now ♥ *A*

[hiza_chan]

ASDFLG;JSHLF'

YOU GUYS ARE SO CUTE.

I did write girl!Axel. I'd only written her once before this, and I'm kind of in love with her, so yeah. The song made me do it.

Thank you, bb, I am glad to have enlightened you. ♥

[gold_panner]

It was Pia showing me and spazzing with me over your other girl!Axel fic that brought you into my little world, actually, ahaha

[hiza_chan]

Oh my god, really? I didn't know that fic actually brought anyone over... It's so... short. And vaguely porny.

[conigliomannaro]

OK THIS DRUNKENNESS MUST BE CONTAGIOUS BECAUSE I THINK I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU A LITTLE AS WELL. NEVER BEEN FOR GENDERSWAPPED STUFF AND--- BUT HOLY SHIT THIS WAS ABOUT NINETEEN DIFFERENT SHADES OF AWESOME PLUS A FREE STOCK OF FIVE KINDS OF ADORABLE AND I DON'T WANNA PRESS THE CAPSLOCK KEY AGAIN BECAUSE THIS LOVE OF MINE CAN ONLY BE EXPRESSED IN WIDE SCREAMED LETTERS. HOLY SHIT IF I COULD SNUG AND RUB ACROSS A STORY, EVER, IT'D BE THIS ONE! HOLY CRAP DEMYX'S HUG BEFORE HE GOES, AND ROXAS' DRUNKENNESS, AND EVERYTHING GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWD. I THINK I AM GOING TO MEM THIS STORY SO I CAN GO BACK TO IT A COUPLE MILLION TIMES, MARRY IT AND HAVE MANY LITTLE STORIES WITH IT. MANY.

[hiza_chan]

I'm pretty sure my eyeballs just spasmed a little while reading this. I'll blame it on the fact that I both still need glasses and that I kind of did a little happy dance when I read this comment.

Just. asdfjkls;f you guys are so awesome.

I love playing with girl!Axel, even though regular Axel owns my heart. And the chance to write wee drunk Roxas? Too awesome to pass up. I LOVE YOU LISA, I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS. ♥♥♥

(AND OMG, YOU RECCED IT ON YOUR JOURNAL. YOU ARE AWESOME AND I AM UNWOOOOOOOORTHY. ♥ :D)

[ravewalker]

AHGVHGAHSHGCHG I DO LOVE GENDERSWAP SO MUCH AND THIS HIT LIKE, ALL MY OTHER BUTTONS. GDI ILU HEATHER.
CAN I TAKE THIS STORY HOME WITH ME I WILL KEEP IT SAFE FOREVER.

[hiza_chan]

Genderswap makes me a happy duck. ♥ I like playing with it. ILU TOO~
AND YES, TAKE IT HOME WITH YOU AND KEEP IT SAFE FOREVER. BUT YOU HAVE TO SHARE! :D

[ravewalker]

♥
I will share nicely 8D
nowhowaboutagirl!Roxas (seewhatIdidthere)

[hiza_chan]

♥
Maybe I'll fit that into one of the five hundred commentfics that I still owe people. Between writing bits of the Chances sequel, I've been filling commentfic. It are difficult. BUT I AM STILL WRITING YOUR FIC, I PROMISE. WE'RE GETTING THERE, IT'S JUST TAKING AWHILE.

[animegoil]

skdfhaskhdfak FUCK I LOVE YOUUUUUUU.

Too funny. and for some reaosn my fave part was Riku keeping Roxas from falling over.

and i believe in love at first sight.

[hiza_chan]

asklfg; I LOVE YOU TOO.

Oddly, that was one of my favorite parts too. There's just something about the Riku-Sora-Roxas BFF trio that gets me. And Riku and Roxas as friends is kind of one of my favorite things out there.

♥♥♥