Comments | phantasmik: [Fic] Axel/Roxas -- Crash, Crash, Burn

phantasmik

[Fic] Axel/Roxas -- Crash, Crash, Burn

Sep 19, 2010 23:16

Title: Crash, Crash, Burn
Series: Kingdom Hearts
Pairing/Characters: Axel/Roxas
Rating: PG-13 for violence.
Total length: 2,324
Warnings: Reincarnation as a recurring theme, AUs, character deaths, (eventual) happy endings.
Summary: Thirteen lives later and they finally stop missing each other.
Author's Note: Written for yira_heerai at my song meme. The lyric ( Read more... )

[pairing] axel/roxas, [f.videogame] kingdom hearts, [genre] au, [genre] angst

Comments 21

yira_heerai September 20 2010, 04:25:56 UTC

I--

There are no words. None. This is awesome. The suicides, the war-torn deaths, the half-memories of something that will always be there. Wanting to do it right.

You. You did this song more than justice. You EXCEEDED IT.

*puddle of goo- PUDDLE OF GOO*

hiza_chan September 20 2010, 05:53:43 UTC

Oh wow, exceeding the song. That is a huge compliment. ♥ So glad you liked it! *revives*

emerald_embers September 20 2010, 04:35:15 UTC

*HEARTS*

*AND HEARTS*

*AND HEARTS*

Omg. This is just - stunning. This is beautiful. It's painful and painful and painful and then so, so, so much hope in that gorgeous ending, and I couldn't love it more. This is wonderful. *HUGS*

hiza_chan September 20 2010, 05:51:10 UTC

Yay! *accepts hearts* I'm so thrilled that you like it. ♥

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hiza_chan September 20 2010, 05:32:07 UTC

That's all right. I'm glad you liked it. ♥

rudy_flamthrowa September 20 2010, 05:09:21 UTC

hiza_chan September 20 2010, 05:13:54 UTC

...I made a homage to Boys? And yes, that was my favorite too, but I wanted the last life to be at the lake so uh, Roxas had to go. I'm sorry! And yes, I am fantastic. ♥

rudy_flamthrowa September 20 2010, 08:46:37 UTC

hiza_chan September 20 2010, 09:05:56 UTC

...huh. Subconscious maybe? Also, I haven't mentioned it yet, but that icon mesmerizes me.

conigliomannaro September 20 2010, 10:32:34 UTC

D: You killed me with this so many times! I've killed Axel a couple times in some fics but... This was so good and yet so terrifyingly haunting. I love the idea of Axel and Roxas chasing each other through lives, it's damn sad and romantic; and I am a sucker for angst and romance, (I'm a woman after all).

It was a good read, but it was even really hard to reach its end. You see, last week someone close to my heart died. Don't worry I won't get all attention whoreish over here and try to snatch a 'poor kid', I just wanted to say you nailed it. The whole 'Fuck I shouldn't have left him alone', the regret and repent for wasting so much time that could have been used better. I could definitely see myself in Axel when he thought he should have moved closed, searched better, tried harder because now it was too late.
It might even be my very own state of mind now, but yeah, very very haunting and well written. But it's not a surprise :)

hiza_chan September 20 2010, 23:42:22 UTC

D: Oh my god, I'm sorry for your loss! I mean, I've had a few close friends die (especially in High School. We lost at least one friend a year and well, it wasn't much fun) so I know what you mean. I could have kicked myself for taking this challenge on because I can't kill EITHER of them. So to kill them again and again... it was difficult. ♥