[FIC] Intercalate

Jun 23, 2011 00:48

Rating: PG-13
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Spoilers: 4.01
Warnings: mild violence
Word Count: ~670
Summary: Dean Winchester meets Castiel for the first time, again.
A/N: My short submission to the Dean/Cas Manifesto for the 4.01 weekly challenge. There is no beta, only Zuul. Creative abuse of punctuation.

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lazarus rising, supernatural, fan fiction, dean/castiel

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geaven June 23 2011, 09:56:28 UTC
Me loves it. Why is it not longer?

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phaelsafe June 24 2011, 07:27:19 UTC
Thank you! This was kind of a spur of the moment experiment, so, yeah, came out as a ficlet.

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vasiliki June 23 2011, 11:55:30 UTC
Nice!

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phaelsafe June 24 2011, 07:27:33 UTC
Thanks <3

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lies_unfurl June 23 2011, 20:15:52 UTC
The tension and the energy in this is perfect, how Dean knows Castiel from the past and knows that he has all of these emotions associated with him, but he doesn't know why that is. The last two paragraphs are particularly powerful.

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phaelsafe June 24 2011, 07:45:16 UTC
Thank you for the feedback! I really didn't want to lose the sense of their profound bond, but slipping back into a brainspace where Cas was an unknown entity was, well, weird.

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signalfire June 27 2011, 21:50:38 UTC
I just don't know how to express the giddy joy this ficlet brought me! Know that there was giddy joy, though.

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phaelsafe June 28 2011, 05:27:38 UTC
Oh, good! I would much rather inspire giddiness and joy than, say, a sudden yearning for anchovy and peanut butter cupcakes. Thank you for reading! <3

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signalfire June 28 2011, 09:48:51 UTC
Well I'm going to have a look around the rest of your fics and so help you if I start looking for anchovies later- <3

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