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[phaelas]

Title: Use you
Author: Las
Pairing: Jonny/Mat, Jonny/Dan, (mentioned) Mat/Dan
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not real, no monies made.
Summary: It’s all a matter of using and being used.

Author’s notes: Finally, the promised porn! No, it’s not one big orgy. Sadly. But almost. :P

Thanks to inside_the_veil for the beta - even if I didn’t really change much. *hides* I

Comments

[imjustdifrent]

Okay. Mat used Jon, and since he wasn't using Dan, Jon allowed Dan to use him as a substitute for Mat. In this way, while things are chaotic and just as fucked up as anything else involving them, Jon wasn't so much being used as providing a favor. And I love how people act like using someone gives them some power over that person, because quite frankly, it's obvious that Jon had power over both of them. No wonder Mat felt lonely - his plaything was taking revenge on him by going to someone else as soon as they were done playing, and I could see where Mat suddenly realizes that Jon has more power over both himself and the two men he sleeps with than Mat could ever think to hold over Jon.

*/ramble*

There could be an awesome sequel...

[phaelas]

Ohhh I love you, haha. I like that theory. A lot. Mostly because there's other people totally convinced that Jonny is being used by both Mat and Dan. Definitely not, eh?

Though I have to admit that Mat, for me, totally gets off on seeing Dan use Jonny and then calling out Mat's name. If he should want more power over Jon, perhaps he'd better change his attitude. Then again, we don't really know Jonny's attitude either, so maybe Jonny is simply making it impossible (though question remains how aware he is of this - he seems pretty in denial of eliciting this all himself).

If I wrote a sequel, that would mean I'd have to choose which of all these theories is truth. XD It'd defeat the whole purpose!

[imjustdifrent]

I think Jonny just enjoys the fact that he's getting laid, especially since he's not into getting himself off. He doesn't care when it happens or by who, just as long as it happens. And I think he's more aware of the situation than people might think... particularly when he's with Dan, since there's the constant moaning of Mat's name, and you said Mat only came to him when there wasn't anything female or good-looking around, so eventually he's gonna put the pattern together and realize what's going on, even if he hasn't already.

LOL there's the next community challenge! You write the first few sentences, and the rest of the comm has to pick their theory and run with it. :)

[phaelas]

Hell yeah, you're right about that one, if you put it like that. He definitely does know what's going on. Little whore. :P

Hahah I'm all for it! I don't think many people even read this one, though (and if they did, they didn't like it enough to comment, which is a bigger problem) so I'm not sure there'd be much ardour? But that would totally work for me to have other people write their own sequel idea.

[imjustdifrent]

Yeah, you're right. But keep in mind that this community sucks when it comes to commenting, no matter how great or sucktastic the piece was. And it's not like it's their fault, necessarily, because there have been times when people will read it, then forget, or be so caught up in something else they're doing that they don't have the time to sit and type up a well-worded comment. It's just what we do

[phaelas]

Yeah I guess you are right about the not having time thing? I am under the impression I do get less comments (from people in the fandom) than the general fic on here, because I don't know anyone yet so there's no extra social push to comment. Or something

[killhannahx3]

Okay, I totally agree with you here.
It sucks when people don't comment your stuff... but I love it more when it's people I have a huge respect for and, even, sort of look up to. People like Jessica (whom this was directed to) and unifiedxdivide are like that for me.
BUT HEY! I'll be your buddy from now on, if you want me to(: Social pushes, onward!

[phaelas]

Yay a new buddy! Haha. That'd be lovely. <3