what you wish for

Jul 29, 2011 16:31

The sound of the wind was deafening. It screamed and howled, slicing through the white-noise rush of waves crashing on all sides against an edifice of monolithic boulders. It whistled shrill through tiny holes in the porous volcanic stones, but low and ominous over the top of the unnatural tube they formed, and sucked any warmth from within so that ( Read more... )

a freewrite, a piece

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nefasus July 30 2011, 12:56:29 UTC
:) are you sure you've never read Bradbury?
I'd swear you two share the same eyes.

This place reminds me of Doomsday, a villain in superman who was bound and buried miles underground. His shackles and the material that was draped over him made it so that even with a strength to match superman's he couldn't move more then an inch at a time. It was never said how long it took him but he basically wiggled back and forth shifting the dirt and rocks until he reached the surface.

I also liked the mantra very much.

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