A stranger in a strange train.

Oct 03, 2009 20:53

It is suffocatingly crowded in here. People jostle and push against each other like water molecules but somehow everyone is quiet at the same time.

He is Caucasian, the only one against a backdrop of Asians but then again he doesn't look too different. He stands alone, gazing absentmindedly around like the average commuter who only wishes for the ( Read more... )

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crimsonverdict October 3 2009, 22:35:53 UTC
I really, dearly enjoyed this. Thank you.



Next time, ask his name. For me. :)

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phabrication November 17 2009, 02:21:55 UTC
Well I'll try, if I ever see him again. :)

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trypanophobic34 October 4 2009, 01:53:42 UTC
I really liked this, too!

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phabrication November 17 2009, 02:22:08 UTC
Thank you!

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nawarii October 4 2009, 11:25:28 UTC
You write beautifully..You really do :)

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phabrication November 17 2009, 02:22:24 UTC
Aw, thanks! :)

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quickjam October 4 2009, 19:08:44 UTC
Aww.

Reminds me of a few times in my life. However, I've come to know the people's names afterwards somehow. I have my sources!! =O

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lovekohii October 5 2009, 21:52:18 UTC
I'm out of words. But either way, they could never compare to yours <3 lovely written!

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