In The Dead of The Night - chapter two

Oct 18, 2008 21:41

Story: In The Dead of The Night
Chapter title: Distracted
Fandom: Southern Vampire Novels
Pairing: Sookie/Eric
Rating: hard R
Summary: There is always something up in the supernatural world. Being under attack, the vampires at Fangtasia are no happy campers and Sookie has more than one reason to be hesitant about being close to Eric.
Spoilers: For ( Read more... )

southern vampire novels, sookie/eric

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duck_or_rabbit October 18 2008, 21:11:36 UTC
I've never read your writing before. I don't know this fandom but how wonderfully done! :D

ps And, ooo, love Case of You, too.

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pforte October 18 2008, 21:48:10 UTC
Thanks so much! It's really sweet of you to read it without knowing what it is about. ♥

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duck_or_rabbit October 18 2008, 21:54:56 UTC
You're welcome. I'm nosey about people's writing. Your prose is cut-glass clear, and also, the proportion of dialouge to description is nicely handled. First person pov is tricky, and I enjoyed Sookie's voice in this. And you had me at Eric unfurling his long legs when he leaned against the desk, lol.

I noticed you have a James/Regulus fic, and though you may be done with HP (don't know) may I suggest you post a link at the comm regulusjames? It's a pretty dead site, but the mod keeps things neat and tidy, and the limited submissions it has received are first class, as I'm sure yours would be. Only a suggestion.

ps friended your writing journal.

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eumelkeks October 18 2008, 22:01:06 UTC
I'm not done with HP but I don't have a lot of time and too many unfinished chaptered fics. In fact, I am still writing on a Remus/Sirius one-shot but it's not my top priority right now.

I always feel bad for cross-posting old fic. It's nothing is from 2006. O_O But if you feel that this is okay, I would definitely post it there. I never really pimped this particular story.

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duck_or_rabbit October 18 2008, 22:11:51 UTC
Oh, good. Glad the fire still burns for HP, even if it's dim.

I don't think posting an older story would be poor etiquette. It's moded in part by nk_aoede who is an outstanding visual artist. She and the other mods would appreciate your contribution, and you may pick up a reader or two.

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