My Stardust Melody, Chapter 14, Part 2

[petuniagirl]

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What the hell was I thinking? Luke chastised himself.  How hard of a fall had he taken?  He couldn't possibly have wanted Reid Oliver, the destroyer of family fortunes, to kiss him.  He hated Reid, so where had that impulse come from?

Not only did he hate Reid, but Reid seemed to hate him for some

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[scotianova]

It's really brilliant, keeping me glued - almost motionelessly - to my desk chair.

Sososo good!

[petuniagirl]

Thank you! I hope that by now you've managed to unglue yourself from that chair--it sounds like it could get painful, lol.

[lurelei]

Owww, Rude Reid, Insecure Luke, Manipulative Damian ("You're too trusting, my son. I've seen men do terrible things for money," Damian said.) and what's with the horse?!?!

I've only known this story for less than two days, but I'm soooo hooked...

[petuniagirl]

Thanks! Damian really should have blushed when he said that he'd seen men do things for money--big ol' hipocrit. The answer to the horse question should be in the next chapter.

[petuniagirl]

Thanks, lucsmum! But I'm afraid you may have to take it for a bit longer!!!

[petuniagirl]

That's it. You get a time out, missy! (I have wayyy too much experience with 2-year-old devil children).

[sylnl]

DAMIAN! Shame on you, you....you piece of...where's the green stuff.....Henryyyyyyyyyyy

[petuniagirl]

Hmmm, I hadn't considered Henry sliming Damian, but that seems like a good idea to me. :)

[sleeper6]

SO close to figuring out the truth. I really hate Damian for how he played both of them and fed them lies. Grrr!

Fantastic updates!

[petuniagirl]

They are close, but their opinions are still pretty fixed, so we'll see if they can get to the truth soon. Damian is a big jerk in this story--I think syl's idea to have Henry slime him is an excellent one.

Thank you!

[sleeper6]

Yes, slime him!!!