thirteenth post; fanfic- good morning, dear

May 09, 2009 02:08

title: good morning, dear
pairing: miharu/yoite
rating: g
summary: sometimes, dreams are just memories.
this is tiny but I missed these two so much.

tonight, the moon is turning tricks again, i'm feeling seasick again )

*fanfic, nabari no ou, !junk/drabble

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littlelinor May 9 2009, 09:27:34 UTC
T.T don't kill me like this so early in the morning

That said, it was beautiful. Loved the sea metaphor and the polaroid.

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rinnakins May 9 2009, 09:29:57 UTC
*saves you for later, then!*

Ahh, thank you. :D I have a thing for sea metaphors. I use them everywhere.

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littlelinor May 9 2009, 09:40:40 UTC
XD
You DO know it makes me want to go and check your previous fics to hunt for them?

(my own overused metaphor group is... actually not metaphors XD
I tend to use very strong physical description of the body's reaction ot emotions. ANd then use metaphors on them, but I don't think I have a perticular field.
Oh wait, I DO have a personal field. Tactile metaphors. )

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rinnakins May 9 2009, 09:43:23 UTC
Haaa~ If it's not a metaphor, it'll likely be an ocean-y theme. They're not everywhere, but they're pretty common for me. I'm sort of bad at being subtle so it's like HAY GUYZ I LIKE THE OCEAN COULD YOU GUESS

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ca_te May 9 2009, 12:17:58 UTC
Ah Rinna <3
I missed you writing about these two!
this is sad but also so beautiful and delicate and deep as always! You are amazing,
"everything's undeveloped polaroid", is really perfect, it really gives the idea and it is very original!
Gorgeous work!

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rinnakins May 9 2009, 20:57:06 UTC
Thank you very much! :D I like that it's 'delicate,' that makes me happy. Uaaahh, I shouldn't go so long without writing them again. ;_;

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rinnakins May 9 2009, 20:56:17 UTC
♥♥♥ Yaaay I'm really glad woo :D :D :D

Also when I see you online next, remind me to show you the clip of Yoite's VA

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maddie_san May 18 2009, 04:33:11 UTC
AHHHHH SINCE WHENNNNNN

-runs to wikipedia-!!!!!!

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shrocomemos May 9 2009, 14:56:23 UTC
8(

BEAUTIFUL. ;o; I love your descriptions.

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rinnakins May 9 2009, 20:57:28 UTC
Ahh, thanks very much! I'm glad, I've been working on that especially.

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lybell May 9 2009, 20:41:50 UTC
!!!! Aw... AW... so beautiful and sad. And I love the simple yet evocative way you wrote this... very nice! It's in my collection of Nabari fanfics now, and I'm very picky. ^__~

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rinnakins May 9 2009, 20:57:52 UTC
I really appreciate it, thanks! I'm glad you liked it, that makes me happy.

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