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Dear Self: Your story must be melodramatic to the point of humor (Which you weren't aiming for) if people are adding lol to the end of a review and only commenting on how there is a one-time mention of a character being in love with another (Which has no bearing on plot) before. These are the kinds of reviews you have been getting for a long time on your takes-itself-seriously mildly-common-but-somewhat-different-direction-than-most-AU story.
In short, you're failing. Stop thinking of yourself as even a decent author and give up.
Yourself.
In short, you're failing. Stop thinking of yourself as even a decent author and give up.
Yourself.