Fic Prompt #10
I have two entries for this fic prompt (both are short).
Title: Unknown Jealousy
Author: narnianqueen119
Rating: G
Warnings: Incest
Pairings: Peter/Susan
Summary: Lucy reflects on the relationship between Peter and Susan, and her jealousy of Susan.
I’ve always been jealous of Susan. She’s always been the pretty one, always been the smart one, always been the talented one. And who am I? I’m the little sister who sits at home and hopes to one day be noticed. Can you understand how I feel?
I was even more jealous of her when she fell in love. I wasn’t jealous of the man that she snagged, but I just wanted to fall in love, too.
Her love was Peter, which in itself sounds strange, doesn’t it? I would never have guessed that she would fall in love with our older brother. At first, it didn’t seem right. But, I suppose that in Narnia, no one thinks of you any worse for that sort of thing.
So, why am I so upset? I mean, I know that I’m not in love with Peter, not by any means. I could never see myself with him. Yet, why is it so hard for me to accept their love for one another, as perfect as it seems?
Lately, I’ve been spending more time outside of Cair Paravel. I just can’t stand to be around here anymore. I’ve been harboring myself in Western Wood, out by Mr. Tumnus’ home and the Beavers’ dam. I feel safe there.
But most of all, when I’m there, I know that I won’t see Peter and Susan. I don’t know why, but I just can’t exist there while Susan has love, and I don’t.
Title: Kingly Hate
Author: narnianqueen119
Rating: G
Warnings: Incest
Pairings: Peter/Susan, some Edmund/Susan
Summary: Edmund is angry at Peter for stealing his love, Susan.
I hate Peter. There’s no law that says that the kings of Narnia must get along, and I certainly don’t see how they ever could again.
He’s a good king, I’ll give him that. He rules Narnia well, and does a fine job at making certain that we stay alive and well. He hasn’t done anything wrong by me in that way, and probably never will.
Yet, I still hate him. He didn’t mean to, but he has stolen my love away from me.
Of course, I suppose I should hate Susan, as well. But am I supposed to hate my true love, though she does not return my love, rather she gives it to another? I cannot bring myself to hate her, nor could I ever.
But Peter, I can hate forever. He has taken her love from me, although neither he nor she knew of my love.
All right, so I shouldn’t be angry. I have no right to judge them on their love and that Susan does not love me. I should have told her of my love before.
But I am still angry. I do not have to think reasonably when I know the woman I love is in love with another. And though I am the Just King of Narnia, I will not be just on this matter. I will still be angry.
A/N: I just had to write a Edmund/Susan sort-of fic. It's got Peter/Susan too, of course.
Title: Unknown Jealousy
Author: narnianqueen119
Rating: G
Warnings: Incest
Pairings: Peter/Susan
Summary: Lucy reflects on the relationship between Peter and Susan, and her jealousy of Susan.
I’ve always been jealous of Susan. She’s always been the pretty one, always been the smart one, always been the talented one. And who am I? I’m the little sister who sits at home and hopes to one day be noticed. Can you understand how I feel?
I was even more jealous of her when she fell in love. I wasn’t jealous of the man that she snagged, but I just wanted to fall in love, too.
Her love was Peter, which in itself sounds strange, doesn’t it? I would never have guessed that she would fall in love with our older brother. At first, it didn’t seem right. But, I suppose that in Narnia, no one thinks of you any worse for that sort of thing.
So, why am I so upset? I mean, I know that I’m not in love with Peter, not by any means. I could never see myself with him. Yet, why is it so hard for me to accept their love for one another, as perfect as it seems?
Lately, I’ve been spending more time outside of Cair Paravel. I just can’t stand to be around here anymore. I’ve been harboring myself in Western Wood, out by Mr. Tumnus’ home and the Beavers’ dam. I feel safe there.
But most of all, when I’m there, I know that I won’t see Peter and Susan. I don’t know why, but I just can’t exist there while Susan has love, and I don’t.
Title: Kingly Hate
Author: narnianqueen119
Rating: G
Warnings: Incest
Pairings: Peter/Susan, some Edmund/Susan
Summary: Edmund is angry at Peter for stealing his love, Susan.
I hate Peter. There’s no law that says that the kings of Narnia must get along, and I certainly don’t see how they ever could again.
He’s a good king, I’ll give him that. He rules Narnia well, and does a fine job at making certain that we stay alive and well. He hasn’t done anything wrong by me in that way, and probably never will.
Yet, I still hate him. He didn’t mean to, but he has stolen my love away from me.
Of course, I suppose I should hate Susan, as well. But am I supposed to hate my true love, though she does not return my love, rather she gives it to another? I cannot bring myself to hate her, nor could I ever.
But Peter, I can hate forever. He has taken her love from me, although neither he nor she knew of my love.
All right, so I shouldn’t be angry. I have no right to judge them on their love and that Susan does not love me. I should have told her of my love before.
But I am still angry. I do not have to think reasonably when I know the woman I love is in love with another. And though I am the Just King of Narnia, I will not be just on this matter. I will still be angry.
A/N: I just had to write a Edmund/Susan sort-of fic. It's got Peter/Susan too, of course.