Fic: All Because of You

Apr 24, 2011 13:16

Rating: G-PG13
Word Count: 1,802 in total
Disclaimer: Heroes characters belong to Tim Kring.
A/N: Well this was interesting. Like haiku fic-writing.
Summary: Fifty-sentence fic meme for 1sentence.
Warnings: Pretty disjointed, bouncing around all over canon and beyond.

Be back later. )

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visiblemarket April 24 2011, 17:34:11 UTC
One of the many boxes from Petrelli’s apartment falls on the way to Evidence, and Sergeant Gilbert watches a Burberry scarf spill onto the floor.

For some reason, that's the one that got to me the most. Oh, Peter.

The faithful flock hurries to their ascribed perches as the Food Giver provides each mendicant with His blessing of nourishing seed.

And I loved that one too. We need more pigeon fic, I think.

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lotus0kid April 24 2011, 18:01:20 UTC
You know it totally happened. Poor Peter.

Claude had his own religion and he never even knew it. I totally be up for more pigeon disciple fic.

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visiblemarket April 24 2011, 18:19:15 UTC
It totally did and Peter was heartbroken to realize even that was gone :(

Hee, that pigeon he carried from one end of the coop to the other was probably considered THE CHOSEN ONE for however long pigeons are capable of remember things. I would not be adverse to more pigeon disciple fic. I was actually going to suggest pigeon fic when you were asking for prompts but then forgot.

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lotus0kid April 24 2011, 18:49:04 UTC
Yeah, but it's okay. Claude will steal him another one.

Heh, I will keep that in mind.

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c_quinn April 24 2011, 18:29:24 UTC
“Then I guess you...” Claude pauses, takes in Peter’s frame, rigid with fear, “... You could come with me.”

And that is what should've happened. And what englishmuffin2 and I once wrote. Because, you know, fan girl denial. [laugh]

They’re never really assigned as partners, but Bennet knows well enough not to break up a matched set.

Wise man, Bennet.

These are all lovely. Thanks for posting!

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lotus0kid April 24 2011, 18:49:43 UTC
I know, right? I would've paid money for that to happen.

Indeed, it's why he's the best.

Thanks very much for reading!

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neonaxelgrease April 25 2011, 17:43:25 UTC
I haven't read Heroes fic in a long time, and I've never read one with this pairing. When I saw it posted, I had to click it, out of curiosity and for some nostalgia of a show I loved. And you did not disappoint in the slightest.

I think run and dream were my favorites, personally, because there was something that just seemed so tangible about them. They were true, they left everything up to assumption... without more context, they can be taken numerous different ways (the beauty of this challenge).

Claude was such an interesting character too, and I think you just got him. Reclusive, an affinity for pigeons, angry, somewhat wise, and still good. And still yearning for a time where he can be visible. (Peter's always been my favorite, so... ^____^)

Good work here!

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lotus0kid April 26 2011, 00:48:50 UTC
*gasp* A new Plaude fan- excellent! *cough* Sorry, I'm a little evangelical about my OTP. I'll just say, if you'd like to read more of the pairing, there are tons of quality fics on peterandclaude. We've been at this for years. Anyway, moving on.

without more context, they can be taken numerous different ways (the beauty of this challenge).
It really is the beauty of it- I especially liked when I came up with something that could apply to both Peter and Claude, whoever the reader preferred, or left a ton of details up to the reader's imagination.

Thanks very much for reading and enjoying! I hope you stick around and see what else we weirdo Plaude fans have come up with.

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